Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic] [X-over r1/2-Bastard][draft] Half a Loaf of Bastard Chapter 1
From: "Esa Karjalainen" <eruuska@ratol.fi>
Date: 4/18/2000, 2:17 PM
To: "Ryoga P Hibiki" <carrotglace@juno.com>
CC: <ffml@fanfic.com>


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Ranma smiled, "Yeah, I just threw some stuff together out of the 
fridge.
It
turned out pretty well."  Ranma noticed that Schneider had a nice 
smile,
but
shoved the thought rudely aside.  Guys didn't think about other 
guy's
smiles.

I have a bad feeling about this...


Agreed, I wonder if Ranma will get out of this somehow either before the
next ch. or in the beginning. She kinda has to be a virgin if the author
wants to have any control of Dark Shnider at all.

Waitasec, shouldn't DS have gone *poof* when they kissed?
A bit later in the fic, that is.

Dark Schneider finally had enough of sitting around stareing at a 
box and
stood up, closing the distance to the couch in 2 steps, then 
sitting down
next to Ranma and gently took her face in his hands, his  lips 
moved to
her,
his arms sliding down to hold her against his strong body as their 
 lips
met
in a warm, lingering kiss.
...

Ranma froze for a moment, but only a moment, then responded 
tentitively to
the kiss, her lips sweet and warm, lingering against his, allowing 
herself
to forget about being a man for once.
aaAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!
Back! Back! Foul Demon!
*GAG*

Seriously though...
You just can't do that with Ranma. Well, not without magic, anyway.


I was under the impression that Ranma got a hold of that spice Shampoo
had in part one somehow. I think this is what caused it anyway. Probably
something that would be revieled in part three somehow.
So it would seem. I guess I didn't read the first part carefully enough.
(sigh)
Still...
Well, anything can come out from this kind of story...



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