From: "Jeffrey Vasquez" <samashta@hotmail.com>
To: "Jeremy Evans" <ianmakabe@hotmail.com>
CC: "FFML" <ffml@fanfic.com>
Subject: [FFML] Re: [preview][multi X-over][Nerima Knights chp. 2]
Date: Thu, 13 Apr 2000 10:35:02 -0500

First off, I love where you're taking this.  A word of warning
though, try not to recreate heros (i.e. Ryouga and Superboy),
instead do your best to let their discoveries generate something
new.  I'm not sure what these new powers might be, but another
Flash incarnation seems rather blazee.  Although, I think that
you've set up a logical path for Ranma, with having him touch the
Speed Source.  It's very believable.

Ryouga was a tough to swallow though, but if you change his
powers a little, have him do something new and purely Ryouga... I
think that it won't feel so much like mimicry.

Actually I do plan to create something new with Ryoga. I'm just using the tactile telekinetic power as a jumping off point. Ranma will also be developing other abilities that deal with his body being able to vibrate and his usage of Chi. Thanks for the C&C

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