Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][ranma] Just a Girl, chapter 1
From: Ronny Hedin
Date: 4/11/2000, 8:26 PM
To: Colleen Leah Morgan
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Just a few quick notes!

Thanks for the comments. ^_^

I was suprised not to see a younger Kuno in action, indeed the lack of

Oh, don't worry, he'll make an appearance eventually.

major martial arts action made this seem like a shoujo with a very
unconventional main character.

As was indeed somewhat the intent.

No mention of the new uniforms they have to wear as high
schoolers?

Not something I wanted to waste space on; everybody knows what they look
like alrady. Good point, though.

Akane came off a little 2D, but I have to admit a bias there.

She had, what, three lines? Give me a break. ^_-;;

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