Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][Draft] Birthright
From: Video Game Addicted Person
Date: 4/11/2000, 12:06 AM
To: Damien Hailey
CC: ffml@fanfic.com


Since I gav him the idea, I may as well make the
first response as to why I 
came up with it.

     Oh dear. I hope this won't develop into an ugly
argument...


     Hmm. Rather unconvincing plotline, I must
admit.
Akane, better than Ranma, training at home? Very,
very
hard to swallow. Even if she went on a same
training
trip as he did, I doubt she would be as good as
him;
she doesn't seem as talented.

Well, it's not as much just her as it is her father
as well.  Soun's been 
pushing Akane just as hard, if not harder, than
Genma's been pushing Ranma.  
That was the major premise of the Idea I had.


     ..... You have completely, utterly lost me here.
How is it possible for Soun to push Akane harder than
Genma did Ranma, without all the abuse, poverty,
homeless life, lack of education, and other elements?
Don't say that job time must have detracted them; IF
(and that's a BIG if) Genma and/or Ranma worked, they
would probably be rigorous jobs,
such as construction works or farming. That's WAAAAY
better training method than sitting around in school
half of the day.

     The point here seems that if Akane was as
good as
Ranma, they would get along very well. I must
disagree; if Ranma was beaten by a girl who lived a
relatively normal life (at least, compared to his
upbringing), then he probably would get frantic to
surpass her (skipping school, training day and
night,
or even attempting to master Neko-ken); I can't see
him being friendly to her. If anything, fear or
hostility is much more likely.

Ranma came back and defeated her the next day, after
spending the night 
planning, and the early morning practicing.  It's
more of a rivalry between 
the two.  It's basicaly from the belief I developed
that Ranma really needs 
a girl who can kick his ass.  As she is in the

     ??? You have the weirdest belief I have ever
encountered. Ranma is like a mild, non-genocidal
version of Vegeta (DB). He HATES being beaten by
anybody; a natural reaction, when you consider that
it's the only thing he's good at.

original series, Akane can do 
that occasionally, but only when she's mad.  Yes,
every time Akane Beats 
Ranma, He's gonna push himself harder, come back,
and beat her.  Then 
Akane's gonna come back and beat him again.  Then
Ranma's gonna beat her... 
it's a vicious cycle.  And since Ranma doesn't like
hitting girls, he's 
either gonna have to change that, or come up with
some imaginative ways of 
stopping Akane without hurting her.

     In other words, you wanted to make them equals?
Since Akane is superior to him in academics and other
civilized common sense, it seems more like unbalancing
their relationship.


And Ranma does fear her, a little bit, anyway.  But
this Akane has learned a 
lot of self-control, something the original Akane
lacks.  Akane is actually 
trying to be civil here, eliminating a lot of their
earlier problems, which, 
as much as I like Akane, I realize are mostly her
own fault.  The biggest 

     Self-control? Akane? Well, it's not the first, I
guess. But then, that raises this question; if Akane
is
so miraculously good just by means of ordinary
training, then wouldn't she be even more egostical
than Ranma? It's not a must, but it's something of a
possibility. In fact, when she lost to Ranma in their
third match, shouldn't she react exactly the same as
he did?

than her.  Akane was the undisputed best martial
artist in Nerima until 
Ranma came along, making her look like an ametuer,
then drawing others after 
him and quickly dropping her far from the top.  This

     Note, however, that Akane was fairly quick to
admit Ranma as being vastly superior... Not in words,
but in attitudes.

Akane doesn't have that 
problem, so that removes a big part of the
animostity the original felt for 
Ranma, and gives her respect for him as a Martial
artist of equal, greater, 
or lesser level(depending on who last beat who). 

     Rivalry respect? THIS early in meeting? When she
(from her point of view) had been peeked on?

They're only really 
friendly to each other when it evens out between
them, and when one of them 
upsets the balance, they get more like their
original selves.  But there's 
still that measure of respect for each other.


     But still, you haven't answered my question: why
didn't Ranma react with fear or hostility toward
Akane, when beaten as a boy? If it was against
somebody like Ryoga or Herb, he could sort of accept
it; they trained almost as hard as he did, maybe even
more. But a Japanese schoolgirl, living comfortably in
home with family and friends, never having to worry
about where the next meal was coming, and even having
the luxury of regularly attending school (May I point
out that he never really protested to going to school
in canon?)... That would probably be unforgivable in
his eyes.
     Ranma is considerably generous and
mild-tempered... but not if you activate his
inferiority complex.
     Well, I hope my ranting didn't tick you off...

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