Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][Ranma] Returning Home Chapter 10 - Minor Correction
From: David Farr
Date: 4/10/2000, 11:54 PM
To: fanfic

While looking through some of the C&C I got on RH 10, I noticed that a single
word was missing that totally screwed up one of the sentences in the last scene.
It was an important idea, and hopefully everyone understood it anyway.

The correct statement should be: "but he (Mousse) could easily admit that she
(Shampoo) was not acting like herself."

I left out the not, which you have to admit, changes it drastically.

Sorry about that folks.

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David Farr
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