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From: Elsa Bibat <aerolbj@i-next.net>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Sunday, April 09, 2000 11:37 PM
Subject: [FFML] [C&C] The Synopsis List Review for March 31
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Title: What Wish?
Chapter: Chapter Four
Genre: Alternate Universe
Author: TimeRunner
Email: keiichi@i-manila.com.ph
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/7482
Date Sent to FFML: March 31, 2000
Archive Number: 8638 (+ 20K)
Size: 16 KB
Series Summary:
Keiichi dials up Skuld, a goddess decidedly less inclined to be nice and
friendly toward her client, and discovers he actually isn't sure what to
wish for.
Segment Summary:
Chapter Four: Keiichi deals with friendship, overbearing rich boys, a
campus queen with a conscience, and something he's supposed to know.
Review:
A well-written OMG fic, though the formatting could do a little work. The
concept is just so interesting and the comedy is pure OMG. I loved
it a lot, though I envision problems when the other sisters arrive,
especially
Belldandy.
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Concerning the formatting -- I discovered that Outlook turns tab
indentations into single spaces. I didn't seem to have this problem when I
still had Eudora (which I lost when my previous HD crashed). Anyway, further
postings will have the standard 4-6 space indentation.
Concerning Belldandy -- Belldandy is scheduled to appear very, very soon,
and unlike her slacker sisters in the original anime and manga, she will
have a very urgent reason for coming down to Earth... but I think I've said
too much already. ^^;
Thanks for the kind comments!
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w.o.m.
TimeRunner's Web Page:
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/7482
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surprised to learn. Writing episodically meant that when I finished one
episode I had no idea about what the next one would contain. When, in the
twists and turns of the plot, some event suddenly seemed to illuminate
things that had gone before, I was as surprised as anyone else."
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