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Title: Shampoo 1/2 Chapter 5: Of Spatulas and Men (prose rewrite)
Genre: Alternate Universe
Author: D.B. Sommer
Email: sommer@3rdm.net
Homepage: http://angcobra.jumpfun.com/dbsommer.html
Summary:
The last of the prose rewrites of the series. In this chapter, Ukyou
Kuonji comes to town and tries seeking revenge on Ranma, only a cursed
Shampoo ends up in the fight instead.
Review:
D.B. Sommer's excellent Shampoo 1/2 series is now all-prose with the last
entry of the prose rewrites. This is obviously significantly better than the script
version and I love it twice than when it first came out.
Keep up the good work and Shampoo 1/2 needs another hundred chapters
or so ! ^_^
There would go the other ten minutes of free time I have.
[SailorMoon / The Terminator]
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Title: Eclipse of the Moon 2: Purification Day
Segment: 1
Genre: Satire/Action
Author: Miashara
Email: s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu
Homepage: http://www.execulink.com/~stryker
Archived at the homepage, eventually...
Date Sent to FFML: March 26, 2000
Size: 9 KB
Series Summary:
Sailor Scouts vs. Terminator. A cheesy sequel to the fic the FFIRC said
"Was almost well done."
Segment Summary:
Stuff happens, people run around like morons, and I make lots of bizarre
jokes and comments.
Review:
The mention of this fic actually perked me up a little. This baby's really funny
read it, for the Terry Pratchett-like prose and comedy if anything else.
Thanks. I also think I have the Sailor Moon/Terminator fic market
covered.
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[Shadows Without Light - an original work]
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Segment: Chapter 5
Genre: Adventure
Author: Miashara
Email: s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu
Homepage: http://www.execulink.com/~stryker
Archived at the homepage
Date Sent to FFML: March 27, 2000
Archive Number: 8439 (+ 20K)
Size: 37 KB
Series Summary:
A bunch of not very normal people get thrown into the twilight zone.
The fight against the Dynasty. The fight to figure out exactly what the
Dynasty is to begin with.
Segment Summary:
Damion's alive. Everyone's happy about that. The main characters
finally all sit down and start talking. Stuff happens.
Review:
Nice. Pretty good dialogue and pretty nice prose, though the formatting
sucks.
Thanks. As for the formatting, well, I sigh. I'm finally going to ditch
MS Word. That should fix most of those problems.