Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][Fanfic] Hearts and Minds, part 4 (first half) of 10
From: Gary Kleppe
Date: 4/9/2000, 2:10 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

warr@pobox.alaska.net (Warr) wrote:

It's sad when I comment on the comments and havn't read the story...  I've
read all and commented on most of the preludes, though that was a while
back.  . . . just waiting for this series to be finished before I read it.

I sincerely hope all of us are alive by then. ^_^;;

Ranma crawled quietly from vehicle top to vehicle top.  Trucks, jeeps and a
few tanks -- about thirty total -- were parked bumper to bumper in neatly
arranged rows.

Afaik, if you're going to use dashes, there shouldn't be any spaces.  Just had
a teacher yell at me for that, actually. . . .

I think you're confusing two different usages. For hyphenated words like
half-baked and two-timing, there's no space, but when a dash is used as
a pause, you do need to space around it.

Keep up the good work, Gary!  At least I assume it was good.  heh

Thanks, I think. ^_^ Lemme know when you've read it. :)


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html


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