In a message dated 4/8/00 11:44:32 AM, sf6nc@scfn.thpl.lib.fl.us writes:
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Just a comment or two. Kiyone has teal colored hair, so is not
technically a brunette. I was not sure who was being referred to at first
because of that description, until the dialogue started (the name was
familiar, but the hair color decription threw me). Other then a typo here
and there it was a good read. I never read it the first time around, so am
eager to see the next several chapters.
Ja Ne!,
Chris >>
I hate it when I hit the wrong button. Anyway, blame the typos on my spell
checker. As for Kiyone's hair, I'd like to go on record as saying that its
always seemed blue-black to me. In fact, more blue then black. Furthermore,
Sasami's hair has always struck me as green, hence, that is the way I've
described it in my fics.
::Shrugs::
Anyway, thanks for writing in and telling me what you thought.
One more thing. When you comment, don't be afraid to make them public
comments. I don't mind.
--Komodo