Subject: [FFML] Re: [Utena][Fanfic] What Is Done
From: "Miller, Bert" <bert.miller@unisys.com>
Date: 4/7/2000, 12:00 PM
To: "'Alan Harnum'" <harnums@thekeep.org>
CC: "'ffml@fanfic.com'" <ffml@fanfic.com>

Nice story.

The answer, in a word, is "Utena".

Work on my other outstanding projects should probably resume once my
Utena-mojo runs out.

I know the feeling.

Which, at the current rate (this story, several more
one-shots definitively planned, and a large-scale post-TV-series story
currently standing at about 300k), may not be for a while.  :)

Looking forward to them.


     I think Oniisama likes you.

Ah, a Nanami soliloquy.  I like.

     Do you know what I am?

     Do you know what I did?

The repetition of these two lines is very effective.  You
convey the obsessive guilt very well, especially with the
first of the two.

Nothing else, really, to say.  Nicely done.





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