A pretty good story, except that I can't see Haruka bothering to try to
fool her parents for five seconds. If she's ever done anything ever
because she was worried about what someone else would think, I don't know
what it is. She strikes me as too defiant to care.
Other than that, very enjoyable.
John Biles
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"How embarrassing must that be for the Kree when they try to explain their
government: "Yes, we worship a giant green head in a tank."
--Reed Richards in a FF parody on psycomic.com