okay, i have feeling, i have to reply to this...
Sigh... not the best start to get reader into story -
pretend that you are incompetent and cant format your story
so that others can read it... dont worry, i didnt quote all
of it.
Marsia Mariner wrote:
C&Cs (if ever) to "sailormars@myself.com"
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<SAILORMOON_FANFIC_DISCLAIMER>
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH
</DISCLAIMER>
<STORY>
<TITLE>FLY ME TO THE MOON</TITLE>
<RATING>RESTRICTED</RATING>
<DECOMPRESSION_METHOD>LZX:15</DECOMPRESSION_METHOD>
<REFERENCES>
<#1>
"http://"+
"worldrevolution.tripod.com/worldrevolution/game_over.html"
<#2>
"http://"+
"worldrevolution.tripod.com/worldrevolution/system_uninstall.html"
<#3>
"http://"+
"worldrevolution.tripod.com/worldrevolution/the_midday_darkness.html"
<#4>
"http://"+
"worldrevolution.tripod.com/worldrevolution/because.html"
</REFERENCES>
</STORY>
<AUTHOR>
<NAME>
Marsia Mariner
</NAME>
<E-MAIL>
sailormars@myself.com
</E-MAIL>
<WEBSITE>
<#PRIMARY>
"http://worldrevolution.tripod.com/"
<#MIRROR>
"http://www.geocities.com/vonkarmann/"
At least i suspect, this is where one cna find these stories
and others in READABLE format.
</WEBSITE>
</AUTHOR>
<DEDICATION>
FOR SOHRYU ASUKA LANGLEY
<!-- I'm aware she would hate this text, but oh well, I just could not
help falling in love with her. -->
</DEDICATION>
;-) why would she?
<FLY ME TO THE MOON>
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\\ [Extreme Sailor Saturn's Log --- Clearance Authorization Level 0
\\ Entry #7]
Aquarius Date 00004.5
I have only started to conquer this planet. It is not completely mine
yet. There is only one thing that would fully convince me that I will
win --- *if* it happened. Will I be that lucky?
\\ [End of Entry]
Disliking use of the so many signs without any explanations.
This story is the one into what i feel, the page full with explanations
like
// - blah, blax, blax
\\ - blah blax blax
++ - blah blax blax
woild have been blessing, not curse.
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Aquarius Date 00004.6
Mars was in the Sahara, continueing the initial test of resistance for
a new group of applicants. She and two of her assistants had just
teleported them all from the Antarctic; the ones who could stand ten
hours of extreme heat after ten hours of extreme cold would be the
next group of new Sailor Senshi. But the exact moment she was going to
teleport herself back to Saturn's Ice Palace, a sudden terrible pain
in the lower abdomen made her fall onto the sand.
-- Number One! What's up?!
-- Don't... worry... Number 6... it's not a thing that I cannot
handle...
But Mars was wrong: her teleport power simply was not working. And her
scalar radio link either.
-- Fuck!
-- Number One, I will take you back to
-- No! You and Number 10 *have* to stay here, to take care of them...
*Ouch*! Call Number Two, she will...
Less than thirty seconds later, Mercury appeared.
-- Number One! What
-- Shut up, and just... take me... the hell... out... of... here...
Mercury promptly obeyed. She teleported Mars and herself to
Medical Lab 3.
-- Mercury...
-- Wait a minute! I am stopping your pain... *now*!
-- OOOUUUCH!
-- As I promised...
-- Yes! That pain... is gone now! Thank you!... But... what...
-- Mars... our medical instruments inform that you are... pregnant.
-- WHAT?????
-- It's an ectopical pregnancy. The embryo is about to tear your left
oviduct and to produce an internal haemorrhage.
Sigh... I got the meaning, but after reading afore
fragment with the dictionary...
Other that that, story started with proper clymax...
However, understanding what is saying what, is one
big P@%& in @$$..
I better wait and hope, this story receives
proper formatting and then comment on it...
Or go to the siad website when i got time, if by that i havent
forget about the said story...
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