Thomas Hood wrote:
Bad pseudo-html markers, incorrect markers of the ones that ARE there, and
too many caps at the start of the fic. This was ALMOST enough for me to not
read it at all. I resisted this urge, though, and continued. OOC characters,
excessive(for SM) use of profanity, MARS having INCEST with her father? Come
on! She... profoundly dislikes... her father, whom she considers abandoned
her. He's a politician or something and never visits. I stopped reading at
this point as the fic seemed to be going way beyond silly to utter nonsense.
Thomas Hood
thood@cs.mun.ca
Well well well. Mr. Morality strikes again! Your criteria for litterary
evaluation
are simply narrow-minded and stupid. "Too many caps"... I guess that just *one*
all-caps word is "too many" to you. OOCs: "what a sin!" Ha ha ha! Mine didn't
rise from
the absolute nothing, Mr. Praesumption. "Excessive" use of profanity "for SM"...
De gustibus et coloribus non est disputandum --- sed criticandum. As for Rei X
her father,
you have just proved to know absolutely nothing of psychology. Also, you have
never learned
to read between the lines. Naoko-sama's work has much more symbolism and *open
possibilities*
than your poor imagination and creativity will ever be able to realize or
appreciate.
You and ppl like you probably have never read deep anything but newspapers,
best-sellers, comix,
and popular magazines --- not to mention "easy-reading"(yuk!) fanfics of course.
You would quickly send to the trash bin the works of the masters
of modern world litterature --- Thomas Mann, Proust, Kafka, Joyce, Shaw,
Strindberg, Ibsen,
Tolstoi, Dostoiewsky, Maugham, Hemingway, und so weiter --- just because you're
so very proud of your
provincialism. I learned a lot from reading their best works, and unfortunately
most
fanfic readers and writers did not. You are no exception to this rule. At least
you could have read
thru not only "Fly me to the moon", but also the four previous "chapters" it
explicitly
makes references to, before ever sending me a totally baseless criticism on it.
Shame on you!
>From your favorite krazy bytch
Marsia.
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