ashes2ashes wrote:

"Zelgadissss"....

"No, it can't be him. I refuse to believe it's him!" Zel put the pillow over his head and tried to disappear under the covers.

Zelgadis is _not_ Ebenezeer Scrooge.  He isn't afraid of the supernatural, or the unknown.  There's no need to have him cower like that.  Other than that, this looks like it could be promising, since Rezo is right.  Zel does have a lot of Rezo in him.




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