| Subject: [FFML] Re: [TM][shortfic] Cold Depths |
| From: "Derek Sherman" <doppleganger@pipeline.com> |
| Date: 4/4/2000, 5:47 PM |
| To: FFML@fanfic.com |
Reply-to: doppleganger@pipeline.com |
On 3 Apr 00, at 9:38, Phil wrote:
I'd just like to point out one potential flaw that you might want to consider explaining in a rewrite - namely, what about Tsunami?
What about here? The presence of Kiyonne indicated to me that this was not an OAV storyline - at least, not as we've seen so far - thus, no Tsunami. Derek-- .---Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List---. | Administrators - ffml-admins@fanfic.com | | Unsubscribing - ffml-request@fanfic.com | | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | `---http://www.fanfic.com/FFML-FAQ.txt ---'