Subject:
Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][Ranma 1/2][Silly] Akane Challenges the
Iron Chef
Date:
Tue, 04 Apr 2000 20:54:03 -0600
From:
David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net>
To:
Thomas Schauer <Thomas_Schauer@ita.doc.gov>
CC:
ffml@fanfic.com
References:
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On the whole I think this would work better if a little more groundwork
was laid for Akane's insane impulse perhaps by having her do a
relatively successful dish that people go overboard on praising. After
all, Akane isn't a total idiot most of the time.
This fic was not line-wrapped and I would not have normally read it if
I did not have an interest in the "Iron Chef"