Subject: 
           Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][Ranma 1/2][Silly] Akane Challenges the 
Iron Chef 
      Date: 
           Tue, 04 Apr 2000 20:54:03 -0600 
      From: 
           David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net>
        To: 
           Thomas Schauer <Thomas_Schauer@ita.doc.gov>
       CC: 
           ffml@fanfic.com
References: 
           1


On the whole I think this would work better if a little more groundwork
was laid for Akane's insane impulse perhaps by having her do a
relatively successful dish that people go overboard on praising.  After
all, Akane isn't a total idiot most of the time.

This fic was not line-wrapped and I would not have normally read it if
I did not have an interest in the "Iron Chef"




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