You need to do a global Search and Replace for all instances of "rouge"
and replace them with "rogue".
Sylia actually appears to be the original Sylia, not the new one.
Where are the mood swings, and flirtatious mannerisms of Sylia 2040?
"Linna?" He asked, trying to ignore the drums in his head, "what's wrong?"
"Linna?" he asked
"Okay, Nene, I want you to stick to her like glue, find an excuse to get her o
ut and about, go shopping or whatever you feel is nessacary, try and found
Comma splicing. "out", "necessary"
"You're not the Phantom are you?" He asked. She laughed.
"he asked"
"Of course," He looked over at Linna and held up the folder of papers.
"Of course." What folder of papers?
"No." She said, taking the papers from him and dropping them into a trash
can. Then she lit a match and dropped that in too.
"she said"
"Nice. Why not a jet? It would be quicker."
BGC 2040 solves that problem by imitating "Samurai Pizza Cats",
firing the suits up through some kind of linear accelerator and letting them
land using the thrusters.
However a jet is more expensive and more conspicuous than a truck.
"Yes Priss, its terribly amusing, now get in there and destroy it."
"it's" Not the only time you make that mistake either.
Quincy Roeschroyitz, Chairman of Genom, wasn't very appealing either. Well
Global search and replace. The name is "Rosenkreuz", I believe. Definitely
not "Roeschroyitz"