The FFML Synopses List Review!
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[Neon Genesis Evangelion / Ranma 1/2]
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Title: Crossed Destinies
Genre: Fusion
Author: Nabiki Saotome
Email: nabiki_saotome@yahoo.com
Date Sent to FFML: March 14, 2000
Archive Number: 7818 (+ 20K)
Size: 50 KB
Summary:
What would the back story to Evangelion be like... if Nabiki was
Gendo
and Ranma was Yui?
Whoa.
In retrospect, Ranma-as-kickass-science-guy is not so easy to
swallow,
but
going through that story, it was very nicely done indeed. I still
Thank you! I hoped that Ranma-chan's transformation would look at the
very least possible *^_^*
think you
could have at least devoted a few more scenes to Akane's perspective
on the
whole situation, but it was a decent fusion all the same. Are you
I had deliberately kept everything as obscure as possible just like how
the back story of NGE was given to us. Ie. Shinji's past, Yui's
relationship with Kozo and Gendo, and so on. I want the reader to fill
in the blanks themselves based on what they know about Ranma and NGE
because I'm too lazy to. ^^;;
I'll see what I can do about adding some perspective without going
terribly over NGE story.
planning
more? The Yui-Shinji relationship has taken an interesting twist
here,
and
I'd very much like to see _that_ developed.
Shinji was always a mama's boy and it is literally true here :-P
It's very good writing... there are a few passages of dialogue that
seem
a
little awkward; read them aloud and you'll see what I mean. But other
Okay, I'll try that again.
than
that, I was kept engaged up to the end. This is definitely a
plausible
fusion, and one I would like to see continued.
Maybe if I can think of a way to write it without making it look like a
retelling of the NGE story with different names, I'll try to continue
it. Thank you for the comments and criticism!
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Ranma: Marry me?
Me: Sure!
Readers: OOC!
Me: Hey, girl can dream!
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