On Sun, 26 Mar 2000, Jerico Mele wrote:
[FFML] [EVA/Lovecraft] Children of an Elder God #15
Date: Fri, 24 Mar 2000 21:06:21 -0800 (PST)
From: Rhea Seraph <rhea@ikkoku.maison-otaku.net>
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Commentary: As always the mechanics of this work are close to perfect.
The plot is impressive, cramming a lot of subtext into this part and I
love the way the characters are interacting. The writing style is
suitably dramatic and though some portions of the narrative lose a bit
of coherence the overall story is excellent. Easily my favorite series
Where did you think it lost coherence?
still running. Highly Recommended.
Thanks!
John Biles
Emperor of all He Surveys
http://www.tass.org/~rhea/falcon.html
"How embarrassing must that be for the Kree when they try to explain their
government: "Yes, we worship a giant green head in a tank."
--Reed Richards in a FF parody on psycomic.com