In a message dated 3/26/00 3:28:20 PM, jmele@brandeis.edu writes:
<< Subject: [FFML] [FFMl][Fanfic][TM]Princess and the Pirate <Chapter 2>
Date: Thu, 23 Mar 2000 06:48:10 EST
From: Kyhdin@aol.com
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Comments: My primary complaint is the length; I want more! Interesting
premise and carried out with a minimium of fuss. Formatting and grammar
are acceptable, and the characters are reacting well. I think you might
be underestimating Ryoko's cunning a little bit; she was a successful
pirate for hundreds of years but she seems a little naive in the scene
with the phone call. Recommended. >>
First off, thank you for your kind words. As for Ryoko, I would point out
that her cunning is more of the stalk, hunt, kill variety. Reading between
the lines isn't exactly on her list of talents. To me anyway. I could be
wrong. Also, a note on continuity, this is set in a TV/OAV/Tenchi Forever
universe. What that means is; It primarily follows the OAV timeline. However,
Kiyone is here and she arrived just like she did in the TV series. The same
for Azaka and Kamidake. Tenchi was kidnapped and Ryoko got him back. Me? I'm
going back to this BGC X-Over that came to me as I was going to sleep last
night.
--Komodo