DB Sommer wrote:
Ohh. This title alone makes it look promising.
Yup. A good title can help attract readers. :)
Gendo, You Bastard!
An Evangelion Fanfic
By Kagami
Subject: RE: Dammit, Commander!
To: Misato Katsuragi <yebisu@angel-apartment.tokyo3.net>
From: Gendo Ikari <soulless@geofront.tokyo3.net>
Major Katsuragi,
The NERV EPF Account is _not_ your personal slosh fund!
'slush' I think.
And in this case 'lush fund' would be more appropriate anyway. ^_^
Heh. I do mean 'slosh' here. 'Getting sloshed' is a slang term for 'getting
drunk'. It might be more common to Australians and perhaps the British,
rather than Americans. :)
Please refrain from using it as such. As for your other
accounts, you will have to contact the Accounts Department
on your own behalf.
Not a good idea to irritate a woman who's :
A: A drunk and going into alchol withdrawl
B: Armed and
C: is a good shot.
True:
Gendo: Yup, but getting shot sounds like a better way to go than getting
mushed under a giant alien mask.
This was cute, but it probably could have had a more effective punchline
though. The Rei/Yui thing is lacking something. Some sort of twist.
I gotta admit this is where most of my short/spamfics fall down: the lack of
a dramatic punchline. To be honest, this was pure satire - I've been trying
to write a funny Genma-bashing fic, and then this full-blown Gendo-bashing
fic pops into my head just as I'm about to sleep. So, I thought, why not? :)
Phil.
D.B. Sommer
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