This is actually one of my favorite TM fanfics. Just wanted
to let you
know. Not as good as Aikan Muyo, but good non the less. 8-)
Thanks! I also like Aikan Muyo a lot.
"Tenchi's scarce time must be allocated very carefully,
Ryouko-san. And who better to do that then Tenchi's favorite?"
I like how you still managed to continue the conflict even
though the fight for Tenchi is over.
The best part about fighting over 'favorite' status is that
_this_ fight is _never_ over. Tenchi's entitled to change his
mind daily, which means the girls are motivated to 'persuade'
him continually.
"Says the flat-chested Princess. Actually, I'm worried about
everyone else getting to Tenchi first. With the list approved,
this could easily turn into a free-for-all race."
"That's true... So what do you suggest?"
THis is good foreshadowing, maybe next chapter?
Heh. Yes, this and Washuu's plan should be fleshed out
more next time.
Just then the door slid open and Tenchi walked in. He stopped
dead in his tracks, staring at four of his fiancees entangled with
each other on the floor, then covered his eyes and groaned.
"I don't want to know. I don't want to know."
THE END (for now).
Good ending. It was very funny. I'm glad to say that you
have picked up the pace from the previous chapters and it
looks like you're actually taking it somewhere.
I _hope_ I'm taking it somewhere, but, to be honest, plot
is definitely secondary to humor in this series.
Look forward to the next chapter.
Good. Thanks again!