I read this on a whim and was quite surprised when it worked. Good job,
I can see the car getting jealous of Ranma when the other fiancee's show
up. [Possibly as villains? Most likely I'd say...anyway.] Perhaps you
could have some of the Jusenkyo water fall on the car? [Spring of Drowned
Akane would be particularly good...] Then Ranma can...really love the
car...and Ryoga...well...he'll love the car too.
One thing that bugs me throughout the fic, is the unessesary all caps
AKANE. Akane is fine, it looks weird and distracts from the story to see
a page that looks like this at times:
AKANE AKANE AKANE
AKANE
AKANE AKANE
AKANE AKANE
AKANE....
See what I mean?
Other than that you did a good job, I'm also assuming that you'll have a
reason for the Jusenkyo water being there in a later part. I read a lot
of people complaining about how it was there for no reason, but it seemed
more like something that would be explained later to me...I could be
wrong about that though.
Ja ne.