Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][Ranma][firstfic][x-over] Once more, from the top. (Prelude)
From: rcarson@rcarson.com
Date: Fri, 24 Mar 100 11:11:37 -0600 (CST)
To: third_child@hotmail.com (James)
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

James writes:

completely opposite what she had been feeling all week.

                      of what

the failed wedding. All Nabiki could due was lay in her bed and listen

                                       do

        She looked down at the tortured remains of a calculator. Its

                                                       calculator, its

had had one briefly. Although she had come to her senses a lot quicker

              briefly, although

than Akane had. Idly, she had wondered if she hadn't held onto that

                        she wondered

little secret, but sold it as she had done with so many others since

                     had sold

then, would things have been any different, any better. Some boys at
school, smitten by her rejection, had insinuated that she was not
interested in them because she liked girls. This of course, like so

           I assume you mean Akane here, but it's not at all clear.

for more, while further convincing most of the other girls of that the

                                                       girls that

it the next time his turn came of at speech and debate. That had

                            came at

A chance to look normal, and follower her heart. Moreover, despite

                               follow

again. And it seemed at times like he might really did like her. And

                                as if he might really like her.

was definitely the same male-jock egocentric jerk weither he was a he

                                                    whether

mouse shared in becoming cured.

  Mousse

in Ranma what ever it was that she thought she saw, and then they got

           whatever

married. However, to force Ranma to marry her just so he could receive
the cure. If that was the only thing driving this marriage, there were

      cure - if

would make. How it would forever scare what, to Akane, even if she had
to marry that jerk, it should have been the most beautiful day of her

     This is quite awkward. Perhaps: How it would forever scar what
sould have been the most beautiful day of Akane's life, even if she had to
marry that jerk.

he killed anyone or anything. 'Besides, how was I suppose to know,

                                                    supposed

        Excuses, she knew. She looked long out the window. There wasn'

                                                                   wasn't

t anything she could do now to take it back. Laughingly, "If only

  anything                                                 "If I

street. Which in and of itself was not strange. The taller figure was

  street, which



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