A-kun McCrillis wrote:
We said we'd never make a second one.
I remember...
We were joking.
Aiiggh!!!
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NEON SIGN EVANGELION PART 2
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That's right, we're doing a second one.
The horror... The horror...
And you're damn well going to read!
SIR, YES SIR!
If nothing else, this fanfic has lived up to its tags of [Humor] and
[Weird]. I still can't get a certain part of the 'fic out of my head.
(Rei - version whatever - saying, "YOU DIE! YOU GO TO HELL AND YOU
DIE!")
As for criticisms, I have only a couple nitpicks:
1. The Rei clones' roman numerals were often incorrect, though I wasn't
entirely certain that this was unintentional.
2. "Sulfuric" acid; from a certain food processing scene.
Jamie
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"I choose you - PIKASPEW!!!"
Jamie to 2 month old daughter Madeline,
shortly after being spat up upon...
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