Subject: [FFML] [SM][etc.][ff][corrected post] Prologue and Chapter 1 of a really big fic
From: "Elsa Bibat" <aerolbj@i-next.net>
Date: 3/24/2000, 4:24 PM
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I think the exact words for this is: SHIT !!! 

I'm sorry. It was late and I haven't slept, trying to squeeze my creative juices for the last
ounce to use for this baby. But anyway, here's the corrected version. Hopefully.

And remember there's a lesson here, kids: Always doublecheck before you post.

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Well, most people have been asking me what happened to Pissing Off Pluto Chapter 3.
 
Well, _This_ is what happened. I started this fic a year ago, after reading Dance of Shiva,
Together Again, The Wheel of Time, Simon Green's Deathstalker novels, and Undocumented
Features. 
 
This is what happens if you read too much, kids, so don't do this at home. I'm a professional. ^_^
 
Anyway, I reached 100 K before I petered out. I left it alone and forgot fanfics for awhile.
 
Now that I've started POP again, this monster turned its sleepy head at me and was just
asking for me to write it. So I wrote. 600K later, I'm still not finished. Damn you, you damn
dirty apes !    @_@ 
 
Now that's its petered out again, I can write POP again, that is if the other one doesn't bite me
in the ass.
 
Anyway, as compensation to the guys and gals who missed POP, I'll post this baby.
 
It's untitled, so suggestions are open.         
 
Thanks to the guys and gals who gave me the Formatting program help. The fic now looks  
something halfway decent, thanks to you.

Anyway C&C is welcome and needed. I need to see if my prose style for this kicks. 
 
And for the entire thing, wait a year or so. I'll send it to the prereaders then, and I'll ask the
permission of all the people on the FFML who have cameos in it, along with a few fanfic
characters from other people's series.
 
Anyway, after this entire thing's finished, I'm hoping to give Biles-sama a run for his money,
along with the guys at Eyrie and Chris Davies. ^_^    

Disclaimer
All characters belong to other people. Most concepts belong to other 
people. You'll know. They're pretty noticeable. So please don't sue. ^_^ 







PROLOGUE

      She had been the Guardian of Time for over nine centuries 
before the madness claimed her. She had fought it like the others 
had, with everything she had and more. But in the end, like all
her predecessors, she snapped.
      The visions came to her like an avalanche, crashing into 
her mind; an unstoppable torrent of information flooding her 
consciousness. So many probabilities. So many possibilities. So 
many destinies.
      What could have been flickered through her mind, flickering 
across her vision, images fluttering like the pages of a book. It
could have been the madness but she could swear that she heard 
cars being shuffled beside her ear as the scenes ran through her
mind. The sound echoed in her head as she gripped the Time Staff, 
symbol of her blessing and bane. With it, came the laughter, that 
mad cackling she would hear whenever the Madness attacked, but 
this time it was as loud as a thunderstorm. The voices swirled 
around her once again, as they always do when that cacophony of 
insanity came calling, and she could hear her. HER. Her nameless 
tormentor saying the words in a flurry. 
      Youllneverhavehimnernevernevermineminehesallmine.    
      She was prostrate on the misty ground that surrounded the 
Gate of Time. Milky white wisps of it swirled around her bent 
knees. She was panting hard and the visions continued to stampede 
into her mind to the tune of the shuffling of cards.
      Shuffle. Shuffle.
      Empires crumbling. Kingdoms starting. Dynasties 
established. Monarchies toppled. Governments ousted. everything 
changing. Always shifting. Like a deck of cards being shuffled, 
rifled, cut and stacked.
      Youllneverhavehimnernevernevermineminehesallmine.
      Her gloved hands tightened their grip on the Time Staff. 
Energy sparked and crackled as she unknowingly started calling on 
her power.
      Shuffle. Shuffle.
      People living, people dying. A multitude of newborns 
screaming their first cry, drawing their first breath of air, 
starting their lives. Children walking a thousand forked paths, 
choices made by themselves and forced upon them by the vagaries 
of fate, leading them to their destinies. Dying alone, living a 
life of pain. Gaining riches, living in luxury. An infinity of 
warlords in the making alongside healers, despots, preachers, 
murderers and messiahs.
      Youllneverhavehimnernevernevermineminehesallmine.
      An endless row of dying faces, sounding their dry, choked 
death rattle, feeling the wisps of life's breath pass through 
their lips. Old men dying in their sleep, happiness etched on 
their dry, wrinkled faces. Young men dying in a forgotten charge 
in a forgotten war. Or was that a war to come and a charge that 
will be ? Their limbs being torn apart by unseen forces, running 
towards their enemy, agony on their faces as they went down 
either by steel or sorcery.
      Life and death, a million born as a million die, seeing all 
the infinite paths that was the chaos of Probability. An eternity 
of lives passing through her mind in one endless second, another 
waiting to take its turn and then the next one.
      The mists swirled around her, her power pushing them away. 
Power crackled up and down the ivory white staff, the orb that 
topped it glowing with an unnatural light. Though she was 
kneeling, the staff was upright and straight as a pole in front 
of her. Her head was bowed before it, locks of her hair concealed 
her eyes. Eyes that were seeing nothing and yet everything at 
once.
      Shuffle. Shuffle. Flicker. Flicker.
      HE
      Stars exploded in her vision, as other stars were born. 
Nova after nova detonated before her eyes, the incredible lights 
blinding her. Suns imploded while planets were born. Swirling 
shadows in the blackness of space stared back at her as they 
sucked her in.
      IS
      She saw worlds, young and old. Molten lava flowed over the 
surface of a fledgling sphere while icy winds blasted across the 
lifeless husk of another. Red. White. Blue. Yellow, Black. Green; 
a kaleidoscope of colors, a symphony of planets danced by her, 
around her. The spark of life fanned by nature and fate, the 
flame extinguished by the harsh winds of chance and destiny.
      MINE
      Extinguished...
      FOREVER
      Snuffed...
      ALWAYS
      Destroyed.
      MINE.
      Her power reached its apex as the purple-pink glow of 
energy erupted around her. Crackling arcs of energy danced all 
over her prostrate form, up and down the staff's length and the 
space around her. The mists were caught up in the power as they 
whirled creating a milky-white tornado around her, with the woman 
at its eye. The orb's carnelian glow strengthened as power came 
into focus and readied itself to break....
      Unmake...
      Tear...    
      Destroy...
      From the violently swirling mists around the Guardian of 
time, the glint of a sharpened blade twinkled before a sword fell 
through the misty barrier, guided by a black-gloved hand.
      It sliced through the weaves of power around the Senshi of 
Pluto.
      It cut through the crackling bolts of power that leaped up 
towards it, as if trying to stop it.
      It sheared through the fabric that could turn aside a 
diamond knife, through soft, supple skin, going down soft sinew 
and hard bone, without a sound,
never stopping.
      The pain came moments later, after the staff had clattered, 
powerless, to the ground. The gloved hand still held it, 
seemingly bound to the Time Staff by an invisible force. The 
winds dissipated and the mists calmed as the power went away and 
all was silent in this place outside of Time.
      She held handless bloody stumps before her, the blood 
coming out in spurts, crying her pain and shame in silent sobs. 
The tears fell on the blade as it withdrew into the mists. In a 
moment of clarity, she looked her side and peered into the mists 
from underneath her hair.
     The mists had settled down and came back to surround her, 
enveloping everything in sight with tendrils of white. Her eyes, 
blurred by tears, could not pierce the thick mists, but she knew 
who was there.  
      Youllneverhavehimnernevernevermineminehesallmine.
      "You know... I loved you.", she weakly gasped out as she 
forced herself to stand with difficulty. Without her hands it was 
a hard task, but she managed. She could see the black silhouette 
of her executioner before her. She swayed, feeling the loss of 
blood and the shock of losing her hands. The Madness was raging 
at the gates of her consciousness. She held it back. Damn if she 
was going to die crazy. She would pass out of this existence as 
she came into it, sane as the day she was born. Sane as the day 
she first held the staff and the power sang in her blood. She 
smiled weakly. Is this what all her predecessors thought when 
faced by the figure before her ?
      She saw the black form move and felt the cold steel of the 
blade at her neck. She could also feel its warmth, the warmth of 
its magic, hungry. Hungering for her. She tried to widen her 
smile, tried to present her executioner with the face that he had 
met so long ago. The beautiful face of a young girl, filled with 
promise and hope. A young girl that did her best and kept it all 
together through the worst times. Another young girl would take 
her place soon. May the Creator have mercy on her soul.
      Youllneverhavehimnernevernevermineminehesallmine.
      You were right. He's all yours. 
      "Thank you.", she croaked out, closing her eyes. She 
dropped to her knees, her injuries and the shock catching up to 
her. 
      "Not yet.", responded a cold voice from the mists, as the 
blade left her neck.
      It moved silently and quickly like the autumn wind that 
blew through the forests, that took dead leaves from the gnarly 
branches and sent them flying. The only sound that came in it's 
passing was the thud of a body as it hit the ground.
      "Now, you thank me."
      Moments later, a great wind blew out from the Gates of 
time. It pushed the mists out, out, out, leaving a path as it 
whistled its way outward into the Lands of Time.  


Chapter 1

      The winds will always be there. They will always be 
blowing. Through dark forests and bright meadows, the winds will 
fly. They always have, they always will. Some winds converge and 
become strong turning into tornadoes, ravaging everything in 
their path, a symbol of destruction. Some winds blow with humble 
meekness, silent and soft as a caress, giving succor and rest, 
symbols of peace and serenity. The ocean winds blow and drive 
great ships across the vast unknown, symbols of travel and 
adventure. The cold winds blow, dragging dead leaves, blowing 
through dead trees, bringing the cold of death with them. But 
whatever they maybe, they are the winds, neither good nor bad, 
but just the wind.
      Let us follow one such wind as it starts its journey. From 
the top of a snow capped mountain, the cold wind flew down. 
Beneath a setting sun, it howled down the mountain's steep face 
towards the forest below. The forest's trees had become brown in 
approach of winter and the some trees were already bare, twisted 
skeletons of their former verdant beauty. Some of them rattled as 
the wind howled through them, the cold it brought a sign of the 
coming snows. The dead leaves rustled on the ground as this 
invisible intruder went through the forest, some of them finding 
enough impetus to fly with winter's precursor.
      But as all strong winds do, this one weakened, slowed. It 
did not howl anymore as it reached the outer reaches of the 
forest. It was now a sibilant whistle, a shadow of its former 
self. In its weakened state it found the girl.
      Garnet shuddered as she felt the wind's cold touch caress 
her bare skin. She rubbed her hands together and rubbed her arms, 
taking great care not to disturb the load on her back. Dressed in 
simple woodsman clothes, she looked around her. She sighed in 
relief as she saw a lightning blasted stump of a tree nearby. The 
load of firewood on her back was getting heavier as time passed 
and she was glad that she was getting close to home. Besides, the 
sun was setting and though the twin moons, Castor and Pollux, 
gave enough light for travelling at night, she would rather be 
home with her grandparents. There were enough stories of haunted 
Greenwood that most people avoided travelling it by night. Even 
Tenchi, one of the bravest persons Garnet knew, hesitated going 
into the Greenwood at night, even when she dared him.
      Hitching up her shoulders, Garnet made sure the firewood 
was secure and made sure her braid was alright. It wouldn't do 
good to have her luxurious green hair damaged a few days before 
the town festival. Several of the young women of the village 
envied her hair and it was Garnet's pride and joy to wear it 
loose when she went with her grandfather to the village every 
seventh day for supplies. Most importantly, of course, is that 
Tenchi liked it. He'd praised the way she cared for it and how 
she kept it as beautiful as it was. Garnet smiled a little as she 
thought how much trouble she took to get his attention. Tenchi 
was the son of the best carpenter in town. Nobuyuki Masaki had a 
good eye and skilful hands. He was always was called upon to 
either fix a house or to make additions. Tenchi's grandfather was 
the local priest of the Temple of Fire up near the foot of the 
mountain. Though quite far apart the Gabrievs and the Masakis 
were the closest of neighbors, excepting for old Uncle Stivan in 
his shack, and had quite a cordial relationship, even though the 
Masakis were of the blood of Jurai. Garnet and Tenchi were the 
best of friends growing up, and now that Garnet had just passed 
her sixteenth summer, she decided that she wanted to be more than 
just friends. Garnet grinned a little at how thick Tenchi could 
be, but most men were like that, her grandmother told her, 
pointing out her grandfather as an example. 
      She sighed again, as she felt the weight of her load as she 
started up another hill. A few more hills and she would be at the 
Gabriev homestead. Her family was quite well-off by local 
standard and no one would just call the Gabriev residence a 
homestead. More like a combination doctor's clinic, school, 
sherrif's office and sheep ranch. Strange, but the Gabriev family 
was always strange. For Garnet, it was more like boringly normal. 
      Yes, her Granny Lina taught her a little sorcery. Yes, her 
Grampa Gourry could still slice a tree into a hundred pieces at 
the age of sixty. Yes, the place is probably the most interesting 
place in the entire thirty mile area, other than the Masaki 
Shrine. But after having grown up in it, it kind of loses its 
novelty. What she wanted was adventure ! 
      The kind that she heard her grandmother talk about when she 
was a little girl and from all the stories she read in the family 
library. She wanted to go to some of the places she'd heard 
about. To go to Cephiro and see its Magic Knights and their 
titanic Mashins, and go to the various beautiful places she read 
about from the book The Knights of Cephiro. To see the beautiful 
forests, the deep blue oceans, and probably go to the floating 
crystal islands in the sky. 
      Just not Cephiro, she wanted to go to some of the other 
worlds she had read about. To go to Autolyca, a world where magic
was non-existent and the law was upheld by the Knight Sabers, 
like from the book by Ruby Lightfingers, The Three Knight Sabers, 
one of Garnet's all-time favorites. Or maybe go to Jurai, where 
Tenchi's ancestors came from, and see the Great Trees, 
reconstructed by the Empress Serenity XXII's magic, may the Light 
shine always upon her name.  Even maybe to the capital itself, 
Selene, a world constructed by the Empire's greatest magicks and 
technologies, a world in itself with no need for a star to warm 
it, all governed by the power of the Silver Shard, the last piece 
of the Silver Crytal. 
      She might even get to see a Senshi, not one of the lesser 
ones created for the other worlds but the Planet Senshi, 
descendants of the original seven who held their titles. Maybe 
even get a chance to meet them or one of the Guardians. Garnet 
blushed a bit at the thought. Granny didn't know but she managed 
to find a stack of trashy romance novels that seemed to have 
belonged to her mother. At least she couldn't see her grandmother 
reading them.
      They were really badly written, but Garnet wasn't exactly 
after the writing. The novels were from the Guardians series 
printed sometime before she was born. They were about the 
Guardians, the men who supplemented the Inner Senshi in defending 
the Empress and her daughter. Usually drawn from those of noble 
blood, they were always portrayed as incredibly handsome, 
chivalrous, and all the stuff that women liked in men. In the 
novels they would always rescue a maiden, who was the heroine in 
dire straits, and they always fought at first, but in the end 
they end up together. Garnet's blush brightened, almost enough to 
match her ruby eyes. Yes, and when they ended up together, well, 
they ended up really together. Tenchi was all well and good, but 
a girl's entitled to a little fantasy now and then, isn't she ?
      She started to whistle a simple tune as she continued her 
walk home. Tenchi had taught it to her one time when they were 
children. He called it Zettai Unmei Mokushiroku, in Juraian that 
meant Ultimate Destiny Apocalypse. It was from this story that he 
had heard from his grandfather about a prince who dueled to have 
the Bride of the Rose. It ended like all fairy tales, with the 
prince riding off into the sunset with his bride. Tenchi told her 
that it was probably one of the most beloved of Juraian legends 
and that his grandfather told him that every year they celebrate 
it at Jurai by holding a great tournament of the sword where the 
winner gets to claim the Rose Bride as his wife. Well, that is, 
if she accepts. They weren't the totally uncivilized barbarians 
like some of Terrans believed them to be. Anyway, Tenchi always 
boasted to her the fact that his grandfather once won the 
tournament and his grandmother was a Rose Bride. He told her once 
that he wanted to go someday and maybe win like his grandfather. 
An idea which she promptly beat him on the head for, and he 
wisely never brought that up again.
      But whatever happened, the tune was quite catchy and 
Garnet liked it. She walked on and she looked up. The sun was 
nearly gone from the sky and she still wasn't home. She hastened 
her steps, stopping her whistling to save her breath. Granma was 
going to be really angry if she wasn't home by night. Besides, 
the prospect of walking in Greenwood, alone, at night was impetus 
enough.
      As she walked faster, she felt it. They always came when 
she least expected it. And this time she didn't really need one 
of these. But the visions could not be refused. Down they came 
crashing into her mind.
      Darkness coming .
      Danger.
      A tide of darkness rising to engulf all that she could see.
      Gloved hands holding a sword and a puppet's strings. 
      Tenchi fading from her sight as he walked away, a sword of 
light in his hand.
      A gate and a staff.
      A silver-haired woman facing off against a monster with 
rows and rows of teeth visible in its mouth.
      A blonde woman facing a fork in the road, suddenly a third 
one opening between the two.
      A man became a woman, becoming a man, as he held a mask up 
to his face. 
      A heart of stone breaking, shattered by a woman's delicate 
hand.
      There were more, but they moved too fast for her to see. 
But through all this, she heard one thing. 
      The Dark is rising. 
      It is coming.
      The Guardian will cry tears of blood for the Dark is 
Rising.
      The Dark is rising and the Bearer of the Ring must make a 
choice.
      The Child of Dark and Light will be asked to make a choice.
      What is your choice ? 
      "GET OUT OF MY HEAD ! DAMN YOU !", Garnet screamed as she 
fell to her knees. Her grandmother had warned her of this. The 
visions were getting stronger. Garnet should have asked her to do 
the Severing, but then she would not be able to do sorcery. Her 
grandmother wouldn't do it, losing her only heir in the Art would 
be a big blow to her. But this time she would beg for it. It was 
too much. The pain.
      Then as suddenly as it came, the visions left her. She 
breathed a sigh of relief as she stood up shakily. She looked to 
her load. Vision or no, her grandmother would have her behind if 
she lost the firewood. She smiled weakly at the thought and 
inhaled deeply. Clear yourself. Focus. Like Gramps taught you. 
Good. Time to go.
      Garnet set off once again, trying to recover from the 
effects of the vision. From what her grandmother knew, she was a 
natural Seer. Probably a powerful one, that's why her visions 
were so strong and affected her deeply. She'd looking in her 
grandmother's books for a way to lessen the blow these visions 
were having on her, but so far no luck. She sighed, at least I 
can still carry this much firewood, looking to her load once 
again.
      The visions were mostly innocuous but sometimes quite 
helpful. Grampa Gourry wouldn't have known of the daimon raid
if it hadn't been for one of her visions, after all. But 
something told her that her most recent bout with her talent was 
a lot more serious than a daimon raid. The Dark is Rising ?
      She'd heard of that phrase before. In one of Granma's 
books, most probably. She better hurry along, the sun was already 
gone and Castor could already be seen in the sky. The last rays 
of sunlight was still there but she better hop to it. She drew in 
another breath and focused, using her grandfather's trick. Her 
load seemed light and she seemed to be moving faster after that.
       She'd almost reached the final hill between her and the 
house when she heard it. It was two words. 
       "He's mine."
       She started and almost turned around. She remembered the 
legends. She gulped a little as she looked up. Pollux and Castor 
were out, and the first stars were starting to come out. Oh, 
hell.
       "He's mine."
        The words seemed to come from behind her again. She 
hopped to it, ignoring the female voice.
        "He's mine. Always remember that. He will always be 
mine.", the voice said behind her with amusement. Garnet topped 
the hill and could already see the lights from the windows of the
Gabriev home. 
        Then a wind blew up from behind her and she felt something 
cold touch her behind her neck and something else lift her long 
braid a little. She shrieked and she ran as fast she could 
towards the light.
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        Lina Gabriev looked staight across the table and into her 
guest's eyes.
      "What are you doing here ?"
      "Is it not enough for me to visit old friends ?"
      "More like old puppets.", Lina answered drily.
      "Ah, but I treat my former puppets well, do I not ? A good 
home, a good life, a peaceful end to what is an altogether 
chaotic life."
      Lina sighed. "Yes. That much I could admit. But I ask you 
once again. What are you doing here ? I hardly think that me and 
Gourry are up to more insanity, courtesy of you." 
      "I heard you have a granddaughter."
      "Yes. Why ?", Lina asked, dreading the answer she would 
receive. This conversation was turning to things she had rather 
not go to.
      "She has the ability to See, doesn't she ?" 
      "No."
      "Lies will do no good.", the voice of her guest turned 
hard. "She is the one."
      "But, why her ? There are others who could See, why her ? 
Why my only grandchild ?", Lina exploded slamming her hand to the 
table. "If this is some sort of way to get back at me ..."
      "She is the one because she bears the mark. I do not 
choose. I merely find and guide. And in the end, kill. Do not ask 
me why. I only know. And you should know me better than that, 
Lina. I never seek vengeance. Vengeance is for idiots. And I am 
not an idiot."
      Lina smile wryly. "That's what you think."
      Her guest smiled a crooked smile in response. 
      That was when Garnet came barreling in through the door.  

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Now off to finally finish POP 3. Along with the SLR articles. See you around !








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