Sketches of Tenchi 4: Tentative Explorations
A Tenchi Muyo! OAV fanfic
by HKMiller
23 March 2000
This is actually one of my favorite TM fanfics. Just wanted to let you
know. Not as good as Aikan Muyo, but good non the less. 8-)
Featuring characters created by Hiroki Hayashi and Masaki
Kajishima, also copyright AiC and Pioneer.
Can expect characters created by Stan "The Man" Lee
The forecaster predicts tart lime, alternating with slight
doses of romance and plot advancement.
And that's why this is soo good...
"Tenchi's scarce time must be allocated very carefully,
Ryouko-san. And who better to do that then Tenchi's favorite?"
I like how you still managed to continue the conflict even though the fight
for Tenchi is over.
"Pe-pe-pe-penetration? No big deal?" Tenchi started to look a
bit panicked.
They don't get the Playboy channel.
Washuu snickered. Sasami scratched her head, looking at Tenchi.
Kiyone smiled at Tenchi. "Really, Tenchi, my people do this all
the time. Don't worry about it."
Kiyone's people do watch the Playboy channel, a lot.
"Please come forward and verify the results for yourselves:
Tenchi's blood and mine are fully compatible for purposes of
producing children. Holy Mother Kiritani has spoken; the Ceremony
of Penetration is complete."
Tenchi slowly toppled face-first onto the futon.
Funny, very funny....
"That's true, isn't it..." Aeka trailed off as she clutched her
hands together under her chin, gazing starry-eyed into space.
"...but, since _I'm_ Tenchi's favorite, it might be a while before
he gets around to you."
"How could Tenchi-sama ever favor a mummy like yourself over
someone with my silken skin?"
"Says the flat-chested Princess. Actually, I'm worried about
everyone else getting to Tenchi first. With the list approved,
this could easily turn into a free-for-all race."
"That's true... So what do you suggest?"
THis is good foreshadowing, maybe next chapter?
Just then the door slid open and Tenchi walked in. He stopped
dead in his tracks, staring at four of his fiancees entangled with
each other on the floor, then covered his eyes and groaned.
"I don't want to know. I don't want to know."
THE END (for now).
Good ending. It was very funny. I'm glad to say that you have picked up
the pace from the previous chapters and it looks like your actually taking
it somewhere. Look forward to the next chapter.