Welcome back! Long time no see.

   Some very interesting technological ideas in this one, as well as nice relationship work. I'll probably never be able to accept the Linna/Nene thing as well as the Priss/Sylia thing, but you make it reasonably believable. My one problem with it is that it, like all your BGC fics to date, is Genom-less. If you do anything more with this continuity, you might want to bring the corp into it -- arguably, corporate intrigue is one of the defining elements of the cyberpunk genre, possibly even more so than cybernetics.

    And you've learned to spell! :)

Chris Davies.
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