sorry more complaints that I found but failed to mention earlier

there are not enough pov (point of views) seems most of them is told by the writer and the few point of views was mostly by Ranko. yet they aren't as good as in part 2

I really had appreciated a pov from Kunou.. he is very good character.

I miss all the Akane pov's I didn't realise it earlier but in fact it was Akanes pov that made the storie so DAMN GOOD.

more Akane!

> okay Genma realises this far to easy and in much to plausible way.. I think it should take more time.


I guess I don't understand this. Genma is well aware that Ranma was a girl, and remembers Ranko's first four and a half years very well. He is her father. He, more than anyone, would start to recognize Ranko in Ranma (or vice versa).

maybe yet I still feel there is something wrong.

> Poor Genma. it isn't so much that Ranko doesn't like to be a warrior but that
> all her fathers teachings all that he have thought her is at naught its like
> there is no Genma in Ranko any more.

Don't jump to conclusions until you see Part 4. :-)

I wait with extremly high expectations.

Deborah

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