Hello,
I am posting this for a friend, Dani Yanega,
yanega@mindspring.com
I have the return field set to HER e-mail. I will forward any
FFML C&C to Dani...
Thanks, and enjoy the story!
Kevin D. Hammel
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Ranma 1/2:
Ranma No More
(working title, but not happy with. I will take suggestions)
Alternate History
By: Dani Yanega
yanega@mindspring.com
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters of Ranma 1/2 nor am I making any
money from this.
Please contact me if you wish to use any part of this story. I would love
it.
Now be kind on the c&c, this is my first FanFic, although I do write other
types of stories. I am giving a fair warning I tend to protect my main
characters way too much, but I will endeavor not to do that here. Be
forewarned this is NON CANNON and if the Tendos even show up do not expect
Akane to be Ranma's fiancee. Be advised that all my knowledge of Ranma 1/2
comes from the wonderful FanFics I have read over the years, I have never
seen any of the Ranma Animes although I have seen Sailor Moon and
Dragonball Z (American version), I would prefer to read the FanFics and
completely ignore the Animes.
The Changes happen at Jusenkyo:
** First Ranma is knocked in by Genma first
** Second Ryoga shows up earlier and sees Ranma receive the curse
** Third Ranma leaves his father at Jusenkyo
After the three changes above everything takes a completely different
turn.
Legend:
[ ] Thought
_ _ Spoken Emphasized Word
< > Spoken foreign language (mostly Chinese)
" " Spoken dialog
NOTE: Ranma will be referred to in the Feminine when in cursed form
Regular Techniques that Ranma and characters use will be in Japanese
and Chinese names where I know them. Ones I make up will be
English.
Ki/Chi? - My feelings on this are as follows, and are used in this story:
KI - Ki is powered by the life force of and individual, (i.e.
their soul). Thus making this a more powerful blast but
harder and more draining to use, until it use has been
strengthened.
Chi - Chi is powered by emotions, and every emotion can be
tapped, but usually the strongest and most prevalent is
used (i.e. confidence, depression, hate, love, etc)
Chapter One
Two figures stand on a cliff over looking a mist covered valley. As they
stare in awe, we pan out to see hundreds of springs of varying sizes and
shapes. In each of the pools stand bamboo poles of differing heights and
numbers, depending on their size.
"Geez, pop this don't look like a dangerous training ground. Are you sure
you read it right?"
"Insolent boy, I know what I am doing, just because it doesn't look
dangerous doesn't mean it isn't."
As the man stands with his arms crossed over his massive chest looking out
over the valley with a stony glare, the young boy shrugs his shoulders
and rolls his eyes. Both men are wearing dingy white gis. The older man
is tall and looks very over weight at a quick glance. At a Longer glance
you could see his body toned for fighting but also there is the start of a
paunch. He wears a white bandana over his head and tied in place with
another one. He has a pair of wire rim glasses perched on his nose. He
looks to be in his early forties.
The boy is about sixteen, with raven black hair tied into a short pig tail,
with eyes as blue and fathomless as the ocean. His appearance at a quick
glance is also deceiving, he stands about five feet ten inches. With a
weak wiry build, looking closer you can see he stands like a fighter, and
has the power to back it up.
As they head into the valley a rustling can be heard behind them but the
men didn't seem to notice.
[I got you now Saotome, revenge will soon be mine.]
The rustling all of a sudden seem to be heading away from the direction the
two men went.
"WHERE THE HELL AM I NOW!!!!"
As the two men enter the valley, they notice off to one side sits an old
hut. As they reach the edge of the springs, they drop their packs and make
ready to do battle. As they jump on top of the poles, an old Chinese man
dressed in a grey uniform comes out of the run down hut.
"Mr. Customers, please to wait!!!"
Shouts the guide as he comes running up. Panting heavily and waving his
arms in a warning gesture.
"Ok, Ranma my boy lets see what you got!"
Can be heard from the older man as he and his son start fighting. The two
fighters leap from pole to pole, looking very much like graceful gazelles.
The old guide tries to get the fighters attention and shouts another
warning but it is cut off, as the guide winces, when...
"Oh, please Mr. Customers is very dangerous must not fight at Jusenkyo,
must stop before fall in..."
It is to late, Genma using a spin kick, hits his son in his solar plexus
knocking the air out of him and sends him flying.
Into the valley comes a young man about sixteen and very muscular. He has
black hair and deep brown eyes, that are full of rage, hate and depression.
He stands about 6 feet or so tall. He is wearing a yellow and black dotted
bandana tied around his head. He also wears a yellow shirt and brown pants
with leather ties on the lower legs of the pants and soft sole leather
boots. He carries a huge backpack with a red umbrella on top. He enters
the valley and sees the two men fighting, as he focuses on the younger one,
he growls, as he narrows his eyes.
"Now I will get my revenge for the Hell you have caused me Saotome!"
He reaches up and withdraws the umbrella, and starts forward when he sees
the boy fall into one of the springs. His eyes go wide at what he sees and
hears next.
The guide shakes his head sadly, then sighs deeply as he goes over to the
pool in which Ranma is just emerging.
"Oh, so sorry Sir, Mr. Customer fall into Spring of Drowned Girl, very
tragic story of girl who drowned 1500 years ago. Now whoever fall in
spring take body of girl when splash with cold water."
Ranma hits the water with a loud splash, he feels his body tingle and begin
to shift its shape, as he brakes the surface of the pool she hears the
guide telling her father about the spring.
"Oh, so sorry Sir, Mr. Customer fall into Spring of Drowned Girl, very
tragic story of girl who drowned 1500 years ago. Now whoever fall in
spring take body of girl when splash with cold water."
She looks down and opens the top of her gi, where her well toned muscular
chest once was, there was now a pair of very well endowed breast. She
reaches a hand down to feel between her legs and finds what should have
been there wasn't. Ranma's eyes stare blankly ahead she does not move as
she hears the guide talk about how the curse is permanent and jumping into
Spring of Drowned Young Man would do nothing since she now carries a
Jusenkyo curse. She learns hot water will change her back, until she was
hit by cold water again.
Ranma slowly and mechanically climbs out of the spring, she turns her back
on her father and the guide. It is then she notices the other boy frozen
in mid stride with a look of horror on his face. When Ranma looks at him
with horror and disbelief emanating from her eyes. The other boy slowly
backs away from the springs.
Ryoga keeps the beautiful red-head girl in his sites as he backs away from
the pain, horror, fear, and depression he sees play across her face. He
can't believe what his eyes are telling him, his mortal enemy has just been
changed into a girl. This broke through his anger, his hate and makes him
realize if he stays there he will be cursed too.
He watches as the girl's father comes up and punches the back of her head,
knocking her to the ground, as she struggles to get to a kneeling position.
"Stop acting like a weak girl, boy take this like a man, you must make
sacrifices for the Art!"
Genma snorts with disgust as he towers over the struggling girl. Ryoga was
about to attack the unfeeling man when something strange starts to happen
to Ranma. She begins to scream and clutch her head as if she is in great
pain. She leans forward putting her forehead to the ground. Genma draws
his leg back and kicks his screaming child in the stomach. Lifting her off
the ground a few feet. As she lands, laying on her side holding her head
and curled into a fetal position, while breathing heavily. Genma with a
look of pure disgust then leans down and grabs the girl by her bright red
pig tail and jerks hard on her hair to try and haul her to her feet. When
a great red aura flares up round the pained girl. It explodes into
existence knocking the guide to the ground just inches from one of the
springs. Genma was not so lucky he takes the brunt of the fiery blast as
it knocks him back and into one of the pools. When he emerges water
dripping off his seven foot tall black and white fur covered body. The
guide standing up shaking his head and tsks.
"Oh, sir you fall into Spring of Drowned Giant Panda, very tragic story of
panda who drown in spring 2000 years ago."
The young man watches with anger as the girls father viciously kicks her
then reaches down and grabs her hair, when he is awed as a fiery red aura
explodes around her and knocks the idiot into one of the springs. The
young man turns and runs when he sees the panda emerge. He knows if he
stays here to much longer he too will be cursed. Ranma watches the boy go,
through a confused haze and sighs as recognition sets in. It was her
friend from junior high Ryoga Hibiki, what she didn't understand was why
and how he got to China.
As she slowly gets to her feet, Ranma notices that the screaming voice in
her mind has subsided to a quiet whimper, it fells like her mind was
shredded into tiny pieces then put into a blender on puree. As she
turns to face the guide and panda. The guide has retrieved some hot water
and pours it on the panda who returns to human form. He then tries to do
the same to Ranma but she stops him.
Genma takes a step back from his child as he sees the ice cold stare of
hatred looking back at him. His eyes widen in fear as he realizes, it is
not his son's eyes alone that looks back at him but the eyes of a stranger,
mixed in with his son. Ranma slowly advances towards her father.
"You have hurt him for the last time, as of this moment on to you he does
not exist."
She says with deadly calm. Genma goes into shock, that does not sound
like his son, then what Ranma is saying registers, his eyes go even wider
as he sputters out...
"B..but you are my heir what a..about the joining of the schools, you
m..must fulfill the agreement, you c.can't do this!"
Ranma-chan raises an eyebrow at new information.
"Joining the schools? Fulfill the agreement? What agreement?"
Realizing he said to much Genma tries to divert Ranma's attention.
"What has happen to you son you're suppose to be a man not this
_weak_ little girl."
He finishes crossing his arms and glaring at his 'daughter'. Genma smiles
inwardly, as he knows what buttons to push to get Ranma away from a subject
or revelation he doesn't want him to have.
Ranma-chan looks at her father then smiles a smile that contains so much
feral anger that Genma backs up a couple of steps, being reminded of what
happened with the Neko-Ken training. He is not paying attention and starts
to topple into another spring. Waving his arms, he just begins to catch
his balance, when Ranma jumps at him. She grabs her father by the throat
and pulls him down to face her. Which is a real feat for a girl of five
feet two inches, considering Genma's bulk. Ranma mumbles something quietly
to herself as she stares into her father's eyes. Genma gulps as he sees
his son's eyes start to glow with a lavender fire, then he screams as he
feels his mind is being torn apart. Ranma suddenly drops Genma and backs
away. As a combination of great emotional pain and disgust fills her eyes.
"There will be no joining of the Anything Goes Martial Arts Schools, or a
fulfilling of an agreement of two _drunken_ fools. As of now you have no
son _you_ have killed him. Ranma's part of the pledge you made to his
mother has been fulfilled. You will fill all the other pledges you have
made for he _will not._"
With that Ranma spits at the ground in front of her father turns and
heads off into the mountains.
"Sirs please to be careful you are heading into Musk territory is very
dangerous for female persons"
Ranma's eyes flare with angry fire, she says nothing nods at his warning
but continues in that direction. As the guide turns back to the now
standing Genma. Genma grabs a hand full of the his shirt and screams into
his face.
"WHAT HAPPEN TO MY SON!!"
The guide looks at him with pity and shakes his head.
"I no know Mr. Customer this never happen to victim of Drowned Girl Spring
before."
"Is there someone who would know? I need to get my son back."
Genma shivers as he remembers the look of hatred his son leveled at him.
The guide removes Genma's hand from the front of his shirt.
"It seems son no want back with you."
States the guide flatly, as he tries to brush out the wrinkles in his top.
"But elders at Joketsuzoku village of Amazons may know."
"Take me there."
Says Genma with a look of distraction as he watches where his child had
left, heading toward the mountains. The guide leads Genma in the opposite
direction his son has taken.
In the bushes all this plays out before the eyes of the eternally lost boy.
As he watches Genma and the guide leave Jusenkyo, Ryoga comes out from the
bushes and stares in the direction the guide took Genma, and he too spit in
the direction of Genma. He then starts after the boy turned girl. Making
sure to keep the springs to his left and staying as far from them as
possible.
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