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Happosai _respecting_ someone? After reading 38
volumes of ranma, I was under the impression that he
didn't respect _anyone_. Also, I think Happossai
could easily have found a hiding place for his
"pretties".
...True. A bit of deus ex machina. Then again, he wants them
kept clean etc. and not go very far, so they must remain in the
house.
Also, the character Happosai respects... I placed his birth
to somewhere during the end of Shogunate... You *Did*
notice who it was who appeared on the door, didn't you ^^;
Still, the fic's not nearly as bad as you made it
out to be (in fact, I think all it needs is a _little_
work). It's just that Happosai (the main character I
presume) was too OOC.
I'll try to work on it. *Sigh*
Who knows, maybe I'll get the [spam] tag off
this someday ^^
BTW: Do you have any idea if Zen's planning to
continue "The Long and Winding Road"
Weeelll.. I just presume he's writing very slowly ^^;;;