Kudos to you for actually finishing a fanfic. It is a rare and beautiful
thing when one is actually completed. I totally loved your epiloge. Misaki
at a nude beach is a cool twist. Good story over all, really enjoyed it.
As for sequels, you might want to think about having Tenchi spending time
with each girl. It's a challenge, but that's the fun part.
Good story,
Rene
------Original Message------
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Sent: March 13, 2000 6:06:47 PM GMT
Subject: [FFML] [fanfic][TM!] Vacation Days Epilogue
Here it is, as promised. Last chance for comments.
Vacation Days
Epilogue
"Ohh, I can't wait to get to the beach."
"Yeah, me too." Tenchi said as he finished tying the cord of his
black-colored (and very baggy) swimming trunks. He double checked the cord.
With the way his luck had been going, the trunks would probably be too
loose and float off him once he hit the ocean or something. No way was he
taking any unnecessary chances, not with the way his vacation had gone so
far.
Mihoshi was nearly bouncing up and down in excitement. "It was nice of you
know who to repair my ship, wasn't it Tenchi?"
"Yes, it was." Tenchi was not enthusiastic about having to constantly refer
to the Juraian Security Directorate as 'you know who,' but they had
promised their silence on the matter, and Mihoshi insisted they not call
the Directorate by name, even in private.
After the successful meeting with General Shakari, he and Mihoshi had been
sworn to secrecy about what had happened. The general had assured Mihoshi
in particular that he would take care of informing the Galaxy Police about
the matter, and had promised to leave out any details concerning her part
in the affair. She was supposed to be on vacation, and if she had to file a
report on the matter, she would be forced to call an end to her vacation
and go through who knew how many debriefings. And it was not as though the
Directorate had not already thoroughly interrogated had and learned all the
needed to know; it would have been a waste of time. Mihoshi had felt bad
about not reporting to her superiors, but they had specifically given
orders that they did not want to hear from her while she was on vacation
and, she was ever the obedient officer. Besides, if you couldn't trust the
Juraian Security Directorate, who could you trust?
To help Mihoshi out, they had rebuilt her ship, leaving it in even better
shape than before the crash, even going so far as do Midasize it. Even
Yukinojo was placed into his new domicile without a problem, although
Shakari informed Mihoshi that they had purged the memory programs that had
information concerning Stargrave and the Yagdagron. They left a fake
diagnostic test that informed Yukinojo there had been a small malfunction
in his memory bank that had wiped out the events in the last few days and
that the problem had since been repaired. That had seemed to take care of
everything, as near as everyone could tell.
The two had landed on Aqua Regia without further incident, proving that
miracle could happen. Yukinojo was happy to shut down and go on his own
'vacation' at last. Accommodations proved no problem, despite arriving over
a week late from when they made their reservations. There was plenty of
room at the hotel Mihoshi had selected, a very nice choice with an elegant
interior and a pleasant, relaxed atmosphere (with little in the way of
screaming children, or screaming aliens, as the case might have been)
Mihoshi told him she had stayed at it before when she was younger, and that
it hadn't changed a bit since those days. After a hassle-free check