Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C] The Synopsis List Review for Feb. 25 and March 3
From: "Steven P. Cornett" <cornetts@gemair.com>
Date: 3/12/2000, 1:54 PM
To: "Elsa Bibat" <aerolbj@i-next.net>, ffml@fanfic.com

On Mon, 13 Mar 2000 01:03:06 +0800, you wrote:

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[Lum * Urusei Yatsura]

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Title:  Urusei Yatsura - The Senior Year: "Insurgency!"

Review: 

I've read UY-TSY and well, I didn't care much for it. Not that because it's bad.
It is quite well written. But, there's a feeling about it that bores me a bit.

	I know what you mean, especially since I've had to really
research this story to make this fit in the continuity.  It is a well
written and thought out series, but without a doubt it is deeply
flawed.

But as they taught you in Eng 4, slog through a written work and you'll find at 
least one jewel or a diamond mine. And in the end, hold no bias but judge the
work by it's merit and you own somewhat skewed logic. ^_^ 

Anyway, and admirable piece of writing. Good pacing and very good 
descriptions. It is a very fine piece of work and would go over well with 
UY-TSY fans, of couse excepting those the author managed to offend 
with some portrayal as given in the note, and it might even get a few 
newbies interested in the main series. It works very well and it might 
even convert me. But as all Bibats are hard to convert, I doubt that. ^_^      

	Well, Ataru in this didn't come out quite as bad as I was
thinking he would in this chapter: I actually managed to put some
depth in him.  As Anand Rao mentioned, I seemed to have imparted an
almost Hamlet-like quality to him (wonder if that makes Mendou into 
his Laertes...hmm, maybe we shouldn't go there!)
	Anyway, I wouldn't worry about converting into a fan of the
main series.  As long as you like this, that'll be good enough.
	Again, thanks.

Comments, flames, grunts and loud noises to:

Steven P. Cornett
cornetts@gemair.com


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