Ouch. I always almost forget how totally wonderful and heartbreaking this
story is. It's so real and hits so close to home, it's a delight to read
again. It would be interesting to see what changes you could make after
being in Japan for a while. The only "mistakes" I noticed were some tab
inconsistencies, but I have way too many of those myself to really say
much.

So post the third one already, I'm dying!

Colleen
--
One more stitch in one more place.






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