Neat! Another A-Ko story! There just aren't enough
of these!
B-Ko looked surprised, then recovered. "I mean I know about
your Evil Plot!"
A-Ko looked shocked. "You mean the one where I cut school so
Commander Yashida and me can spend the afternoon at the love
motel?"
This line struck an odd note to me; I have trouble picturing
A-Ko doing such a thing.
A-Ko and B-Ko ran up to C-Ko and hugged her.
"SHIIKO-CHAN!!" they cried together. "We were so *worried*
You use "SHIIKO" twice, and "C-Ko" the rest of the time.
This reads oddly to me; I'd suggest that you stick to one or the
other.
A-Ko felt her oldest friend's arm around her throat, choking
the life out of her ... then the presence of her oldest
enemy. The one she'd fought her entire life.
Her own anger.
This also isn't really the way I think of A-Ko. In the
four OAVs, she isn't often angry, and we see little evidence
that she has trouble controlling her strength when she is
angry.