One thing that strikes me....
There should be some symbol highlighting the Guyver's speaking part when it's
talking to Molly. It would set it off from the descriptive parts.
Such as:
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"So you're some sort of biological armor?" Molly asked as she stepped out of
the shower. Over the past hour, between bites of sausage, pancakes, and all
through the shower, Molly's new friend had explained, in painstaking detail,
exactly what he was.
<That's one way of putting it.>
"But why did these Aliens-"
<The Advent>
"The Advent then. Why did the Advent build the Guyvers in the first place?"
<They wanted Justice. The Advent believed that there was no order in the
universe save that which was imposed.>
"And since no one else wanted the job, they took it?"
<After the first Guyver Units stopped a war, nobody really wanted to argue.>
"How did they stop it?"
<They killed the leaders of both sides until they agreed to a truce.>
"A truce? They didn't conquer them?"
<Why would they? The Advent simply wanted the war to stop. The Guyver Units
were so effective, the Advent built more and sent them out on ships to every
star with a celestial body capable of supporting matter based sentient life.>
"That's a lot of planets." Molly said as she laid out the shaving supplies.
Though there were electric razors, Molly, like her mother, preferred the old
fashioned way.
<Its a big universe,> Was the casual reply.
"The whole universe?" Molly sputtered then swore as the razor nicked her leg.
<Why so surprised?>
"A few star systems I can see, a whole sector of the Galaxy yeah, but the
whole freakin universe?"
<They aren't the sort to do things by halves.>
"No kidding." Molly muttered.
It was perhaps five minutes later that Molly had a thought.
"Hey. If you're a suit of armor, and the other Guyvers are suits of armor,
does that mean there's a bunch of other people walking around with voices in
their heads?"
<Of course not. The Guyver Units aren't sentient.> There was a long pause.
Several minutes passed.
"Yes?" Molly asked, unable to take the silence anymore.
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You can use <> like above, ><, #, *,//, {},[], or other sort of symbol to set
off the armor's speaking parts. It's doesn't matter whether or not the voice
is real -- it needs to stand out as dialogue, separate from the descriptive
parts of the scene.
Craig