Michael A. Chase wrote:
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I'm very glad to see more of this. You've created a very interesting
universe.
I had the impression that there had already been a magical girl war, or is
this the start of it?
A bit of history for this universe (it is, BTW, based on an RPG setting I've
been developing called "Magical World"*). In the late 1980s there were two
magical girls of incredible power, Sailor Cosmos and Magical Knight Mariko,
who were highly charismatic leaders among their kind. Something sparked
agression between the two, and they raised entire armies of magical girls to
fight each other. Mortals were powerful to stop this madness, until a man
known only as Shadow Stalker -- the first magical girl hunter -- assassinated
both leaders, bringing the war to an end on christmas eve. Needless to say,
this didn't exactly endear the mahou shoujo to the world. The Magical War
isn't really a part of the plot of Force of Magic, but it's still in the same
setting, and something every magical girl recalls with a shudder.
*Currently on the Thrash home page
(http://www.geocities.com/tokyo/6127/thrash/)
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Blackbird's Domain http://www.geocities.com/tokyo/6127/
Knight Kevlar of the Immortal Frog Silver Knight of Mihoshi
"Be nice to me; I might just develop
psychokinetic powers and destroy Tokyo!"
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