Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C] Accidental Goddess 4
From: "Miller, Bert" <bert.miller@unisys.com>
Date: 3/2/2000, 9:27 AM
To: "'D.F. Roeder'" <dfroeder@flash.net>
CC: "'ffml@fanfic.com'" <ffml@fanfic.com>

Perhaps I could invert Belldandy's reaction and have her assure
everyone that Genma must really be a good person on the inside -
just hiding it or something. Mass face-fault ensues. :)  (You'll
need to thank Vince for that one. :)

Now THAT's the way to handle that scene!  I, too, thought Belldandy's
reaction _WAY_ OOC.  Vince's suggestion works wonderfully for
me:  Belldandy is very IC, and the mass face-fault carries the
message.  (You might even consider later scenes where Belldandy
tries very hard to find evidence of Genma's good side, and fails.)

(For the record, I enjoyed this episode a lot, and I agree with
Gary about the descriptive sections.)


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