I do now own Ranma 1/2 or any of its characters. I wish I did so I could receive the praise and money from such a well loved series. A talented writer and a whole bunch of men in business suits in a far away country own Ranma 1/2.
This is a very rough draft. Something I toyed around with and just wanted to see how it goes. C & C is always welcomed.
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Cloudquest Productions
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A Ranma Fanfiction
The Drowned Girl
By
Rene Chavez
renechavez@sprintmail.com
Ranma jumped over rooftop to rooftop. His breathing was becoming heavy. He stopped and listened. He could hear screams and fighting following him from every direction. He stopped and took a deep breath. All his problems were weighing him down. Ever since the failed wedding fiasco, it seems that the stakes have gone higher. Shampoo, Ukyo, and Kodachi have become more aggressive in pursuing Ranma's affection. Because of this new aggression, Akane has become more violent and less restrained toward him. His father, Genma, and Soun Tendo have become more persistent in marrying him off to a Akane. Nothing was working out for him anymore.
"Why can't I fix this?" he said to himself. A sudden splash of water struck him.
"Sweeto!" screamed Happosai as he glomped onto Ranma's chest. Ranma's aura flared. The old hentai came at the wrong time. With a quick and powerful kick, Happosai was sent flying away.
Ranma took a deep breath and jumped down the street. She walked around for hours until she started heading back to the Tendo house. She crept in and listened. Everybody was asleep. Ranma was relieved that she didn't have to deal with anymore fighting for at least a while. She walked into the furo and set the hot water. She took off his clothes and was about to step into the tub. She turned and saw herself in the mirror. "This isn't me," she said. She stepped into the tub and became a male again.
"I have to do something," Ranma thought to himself. He sat there for a while pondering his problems. If maybe he weren't cursed, he would be able to handle his problems better. Most of his situations were placed because of his gender situation. Akane hated him because he wasn't what he appeared to be when they first met. Shampoo hunted his female half and lusted for his male half. The same went for the Kunos. Ranma had to do something. Suddenly, an idea came to him.
A while later, Ranma sneaked into Happosai's room. "It failed because of dad and the old pervert, maybe if I go solo," Ranma thought. He searched through the pervert's possessions. The man had nothing but panties and bras. He started knocking on the floors. He heard a hollow sound. Ranma felt around a hidden panel. He searched inside and found what he was looking for, the mirror.
Ranma took a deep breath. "Ok, mirror, we've been through this. This time, I want to go where I can fix everything and..." Ranma couldn't finish. The mirror started glowing and a flash of light exploded.
Ranma was disoriented. The sudden brightness of the day blinded him. He stood up and adjusted his eyes. "Where am I?" asked Ranma.
"Help!" shouted a voice. Ranma stood up and placed the mirror in his shirt. He ran toward the noise. He ran up a hill and saw where he was. It was Jusenko, the cursed springs. He looked down and two men in armor throwing a large bad tied up with rope into one of the pools. From the shape and movement, Ranma knew there was somebody in that. He quickly ran up the spring. The men saw him and coming and quickly grabbed their spears. Ranma dodged the strikes and threw a few more punches at the guards. Ranma knocked out one, but the other had enough time to retaliate. He swung his spear and caught Ranma off guard. The blow struck him in the stomach. Ranma quickly grabbed the pole and threw the guard against the rock wall.
Ranma hoped he didn't take too much time and dove into the spring. He felt himself change and swam down to the bottom. She could see the figure was still moving. Ranma grabbed a hold of the bag and started swimming up to the surface. She could feel the person was still alive. She quickly put the person in and arms and jumped away. Those guards were too dangerous to be around them for too long. Ranma ran into the woods and stopped until she thought he was safe. Ranma set the bag down. He could hear somebody coughing. Ranma pulled apart the bag. Ranma's mouth dropped when she saw the person she just saved. Ranma just saved Ranma from being drowned. Something was happening to Ranma as he pulled the bag open.
It was his female half. Ranma looked at himself and he changed back to his own male form.
The girl looked up to him. Ranma looked at himself. He was a male again. "I'm cured," Ranma thought.
"Thank you," the redheaded girl said mildly. Ranma looked at her closely. She was his female half, but she was different. She had her red hair long and flowing. She was wearing a kimono and some fancy jewelry on her hair. Ranma was caught in her eyes.
She bowed, "My name is Miyun." Ranma quickly snapped back into reality.
"I'm Ranma Saotome. Why were those guys trying to drown you?" he asked.
Miyun started crying. Ranma was completely unaware of what to do. He placed his arm around her. She quickly grabbed on to his chest and cried into his shirt.
"There, there," Ranma said, "nobody is going to hurt you. I promise." The girls crying stopped.
"They kidnapped me from my family. These bandits came after a show and they took me when I was asleep. They were going to drown me in that spring and they said they were going to make more of me and sell them off as slaves and prostitutes," said Miyun.
Ranma's anger was swelling inside of him. "How can people do such a cruel thing?" he asked. He suddenly remembered that he was cursed into her image. They succeeded once. This made Ranma angrier.
"Listen," Ranma said, "your safe and we're going to take you home, OK?" The young girl nodded and hugged him tighter. Ranma and kept her in his arms for a while, he knew that those bandits were probably looking for him. Unfortunately, the girl fell asleep in his arms. He reached into his shirt and pulled out the mirror. It was shattered. "I wish we could take Miyun to her family," Ranma said. The mirror did nothing.
"Damn it, it's useless," Ranma said. He placed the mirror back into his shirt. He regretted not packing for this expedition. It was summer time at Jusenko and the night was rather pleasant. He leaned back and drifted off to sleep.
The sun rose as morning greeted him. Ranma woke up and looked down. The Miyun was still asleep, but she was on her back. Her kimono was loosed and Ranma could see a great deal of her chest. Ranma has seen Miyun's naked form many times, but seeing it outside his himself brought on new sensations within him. The girls soon started stirring. Miyun quickly realized her kimono was open and wrapped herself up. Ranma looked up. Both their faces were blushing red.
They both stood up. "There should be an amazon village nearby. I bet we could get some food and maybe some info on where your folks are at," Ranma said.
"Thank you for your kindness, you really are a great man," she said in quiet voice.
"Don't think anything about it," he said.
They started walking through the hills. "Nothing's changed much," Ranma said.
"You've been here before?" inquired the girl.
"Not for a very long time. My pop took me here to train once," he said.
She looked at him with bright eyes, "You must be a great and valiant warrior."
Ranma turned to her, "I'm just a martial artist, nothing more." Ranma turned around scared. She was holding his arm as the continued walking.
They reached the Amazon village. Ranma stood back amazed at how small it was. "They must have just started the village," Ranma thought. Ranma continued walking toward the village.
To be continued....