Subject: [FFML] [fic][R.5][silly idea] Mint Julep 1/2
From: "Forrest " DUNOTS " Walker" <wholesome@n2.com>
Date: 2/24/2000, 5:13 AM
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[Note to self (and others): I don't own any of these 
characters. I am just using them briefly; this time I'll try 
not to dent any of them.
This is a dumb idea (in a fic? naww...) that I came up with a 
while back, and wrote a little on, then left to the ages... 
Well, the ages are now. So, I finished it, fixed two errors, 
and decided that, yes, the world IS ready for a skinny 
Blofeld... I mean, a drunken Ranma. Enjoy or not. I don't 
force ya to read nuthin'.
This fic (and oh-so-many others) can be found at my website 
at http://DUNOTS.tripod.com, but this one isn't linked to 
yet. Oh well.]
Mint Julep �
[A stupid fic by Forrest "DUNOTS" Walker]
Whapt!! Getting a little tired. Krapakt!! That sort of hurt. 
Thwupmt!! Arm is burning. Kraplakto!! Shit!! Getting sloppy. 
Hit the wood. Ow. Time to stop for today.
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	*
	As Akane stepped out of the Furo, she sighed deeply, 
feeling nicely loose after a relaxing bout of practicing 
closed hand techniques on the training post outside. 
Unfortunately, she had missed the rope-covered part once and 
scraped her knuckle on the rough wood. Apparently it was 
bleeding a little. She examined her hand a bit more closely 
in the hallway, noting how the leaking blood was being sopped 
up by the pair of panties that had just landed on her hand. 
Panties? Landed? Happosai.
	"Whaaaa! Akane, m'darlin! I must say you look beautiful 
in that nice yellow towel! Mind if I take it of your... 
hands?" asked a creaky old voice from behind. 
	Reflexively, she threw a spinning round kick directly to 
his melon-like head. "Darn perverts," Akane muttered under 
her breath as she proceeded into her room.
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	*
	Genma walked into the hallway just in time see a small 
man careening about the hallway like a pinball. As Genma 
began to scream in horror, he caught a faceful of crusty 
Haposai. He muttered some vague obscenities as he peeled the 
foreign wrinkeled flesh off his own. Scowling, he put his arm 
out the window and let Happosai plunk to the ground.
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	*
	Ranma was a bit surprised when a small mushy sack of 
lechery fell atop his head. "Aww, geez! You again? I thought 
I got ridda you! What're you doin' back?"
	"Ranma, m'boy, how's it goin?" he asked in his least 
raspy voice.
	"Answer the question, you lecherous jerk!"
	"Okay, okay," pleaded a pathetic Happosai, "I was just 
back arranging a training trip with you and your father. Mr. 
Tendo, too! Whaddaya say? C'mon, Ranma, you're my favorite 
pupil!"
	As the little creep pulled out a flask of icy water, 
Ranma chucked him over the wall, screaming, "No, no, and NO!! 
I don't go nowhere with lecherous old bags like you!!"
	Disturbed by what had just happened, Ranma wandered into 
the dining room, collapsing next to the table. He 
unconciously picked up the drink on the table and finished it 
off. It tasted a little minty, but with a sort of burning 
flavor. It was kind of good. 
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	*
	"Hey, Ranma! We're going now, so don't you make any 
trouble, you got that, boy?" Hollered the familiar gruff 
voice of his father from the gate.
	"Take good care of my daughters, Ranma? Got that?!!!? 
RIGHT!!??!!" said Soan Tendo, giant tongue waving out of his 
huge blue face.
	Ranma gave a start and crouched down obsequiously, "Y- 
yes, sir, Mr. Tendo!"
	"Hmph," Soan breathed as he and his best friend walked 
down the road to find their far-off mentor.
			*					*				
	*
	For about a minute, Ranma sat, letting the breeze pass 
over his face, moving his hair slowly. Suddenly, he jumped 
into the pond and back again, this time enjoying the summer 
sunset a little more.
	"Hello, Ranma. What are you doing here? I thought you 
were going to train with your Father," asked Kasumi sweetly 
from the doorway.
	"Ugh, yeah, right," scoffed Ranma, looking at Kasumi's 
loving face, smiling and at just a bit of an angle, "Oh, hey! 
I was just drinking some of this stuff. What was it?"
	Picking up the white cup, Kasumi looked inside and said 
politely, "why, that was a mint julep. Would you like 
another?"
	"Yeah, guess so. 'S pretty good, I guess. Kinda 
relaxing."
	Kasumi nodded slightly and glided smoothly into the 
kitchen.
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	*
	Nabiki slipped her left shoe on, thus completing her 
ensemble for her business venture tonight. She stood quickly, 
smoothing her black skited and straightening her black 
jacket. Forcefully and a bit proud, Nabiki ambled into the 
dining room hoping to find someone to relay her mesage to.
	"Ah, hello Ranma. I'm going out tonight. Play nice now." 
she cooed at the redhead sitting with her back to the wall.
	"Yeh, okay Nabiki."
	"Good god, are you drinking?" she sniffed, "that's mint 
julep! Well, I guess it's none of my business," she said 
slyly, picking up a full glass off the table and strolling 
outside.
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	*
	"Hey Ranma, what do you want to do tonight?" asked Akane 
at the person around the corner in the dining room.
	The only response she got was, "vwwahhh??"
	Turning the corner, Akane saw something she genuinely 
did not expect. She had seen Ranma in nearly every situation, 
but never like this. Never leaning against a wall with tired 
eyes and an almost evil grin.
	"Ranma, are... are you alright?" asked Akane with 
genuine concern, "Wh.. where's Kasumi?"
	"Oh. She went to go get some... whaddya call it... mint. 
It's just you'n me, Akane," said Ranma as she slowly crawled 
toward Akane on hands and knees.
	"Um, what have you been doing in here?" asked Akane, 
edging away from her fianc�e. 
	"No, no, I'm okay. Don't worry about me, I'm okay. I'm 
always okay. No one ever cares about me. No one ever thinks I 
have any feeling DON'T I MATTER?!?" stated Ranma as she began 
to sob, reaching for Akane.
	Akane, taken aback by this sudden event could do nothing 
but cradle the crying girl in her arms, wondering what was 
going on. As Ranma continued to whimper, Akane suddenly felt 
a sort of sympathy for Ranma, for all the terrible things he 
had gone through over the years. Maybe she was a little too 
harsh in her chidings. If this outburst was any indication, 
Ranma cared a lot more than he let on. He was vulnerable. 
Beneath it all, he was a person, a real, caring, hurting 
person. For a moment, Akane didn't mind comforting Ranma.
	"A.. Akane?" said Ranma weakly, snapping Akane out of 
her reverie, "I... just wanted to... thanks. I needed that. 
You, you're so nice, really. I mean, I always say you're 
uncute and all, but, it's like, I'm having a bad day, but 
you'll be at home, you know? I... don't let me... don't..."
	Akane could see that Ranma was looking into her eyes 
intently, almost with a glazed look, but not quite. It wasn't 
pathetic, but it seemed like a sort of weakness. Ranma was 
baring something to Akane, but she didn't know what. Or why.
	"I, um, it's okay, Ranma. I'm here," it seemed like the 
right thing to say.
	Ranma wrapped her arms more tightly around the somewhat 
taller girl comforting her and sighed deeply, "Akane, you 
know what?"
	"Wh-what Ranma?"
	"You feel so soft..."
	Was she calling her fat? "Are you calling me..."
	Ranma continued, unfazed, "so nice... Mmm... I'd stay 
here forever, I think."
	Torn between the urges to destroy Ranma for snuggling 
into her and to go into shock from receiving a wholehearted 
compliment from Ranma, Akane froze, utterly baffled as the 
slight female in her arms began to sob again.
	"Huh, wha?" woke Akane from her daze, "What's wrong, 
Ranma? Are you, are you okay?" 
	"Yeh... sfft... it's just... it's just that... I mean 
it's so beautiful! So goddam beautiful! All this time, we, 
like, we fight and all, so this... we won't ever do this, 
y'know? I... I love how this is... I..." 
	Akane, barely able to stop from crying herself, was only 
able to edge out, "R-Ranma?..."
	"Akane, you, you just gotta... I have to.... I... It's 
prob'ly... I dunno why I'm like this..."
	Akane asked, a little more awake, "Wh... why?"
	Ranma answered thoughtlessly, "Well, Guess I was 
drinkin' those... whadda... mint joolips? Yeh. Well, I was 
sayin'... Akane, I... l..."
	She was promptly interrupted when Akane snapped to her 
feet, throwing Ranma to the ground. Akane promptly shouted, 
"what?!? You moron! You're drunk!!! You're just tr..." but 
she trailed off because she looked down.
	There was a broken Ranma, laying in a crumpled girl-type 
heap, crying, and looking into Akane's eyes with fear. 
Terror. Terror on its way to hate.
	"Akane..." whimpered Ranma feebly, "I'm sorry... I... 
I... didn't..." then paused, growing more pathetic, "why do 
you hate me..."
	Something in Akane's mind snapped. "No! No, I don't hate 
you! I... Ranma..." As Ranma began to compose herself a bit, 
Akane ran into the kitchen, going straight for the stove.
Somewhat wet, Ranma grimaced as he felt the familiar but 
still disorienting wrenching as he became male again. He also 
noticed that he was thinking a little straighter. Not too 
much, but enough. Enough to realize.
	"Crap!! Goddam crap!! I can't believe I... Aaargh!!!" 
howled Ranma, holding his head in both hands, "Man, do I feel 
stupid!"
	As he began to down another mint julep, he felt a tap on 
his shoulder.
	"Um, Ranma?" came a familiar voice.
	He winced as he turned to face Akane, waiting for his 
pummeling. He had done something stupid.
	"Why are you drinking?" she asked, entirely too 
politely.
	"Huh? Whaddaya mean?"
	"You do know that mint juleps are alcohol, don't you?"
Apparently, his life with Genma had not taught him 
everything.
	"What? Oh no! No! That's why I... I..." he trailed off, 
beginning to feel the effects of the last couple of glasses.
	"It's okay, Ranma. I don't... blame you. It's alright," 
consoled Akane, apparently with some effort as she knelt down 
next to him.
	All inebriation aside, Ranma realized that this was some 
odd behavior on Akane's part. Oh. Here comes that last glass. 
Maybe this wasn't all bad. If this kept up, maybe he could 
get some. HUH? What was he thinking?!? The liquor really was 
getting to him.
	"Ranma?" asked the woman staring into his eyes, putting 
her hand on his.
	Holding her hand a little tighter and slowly moving 
forward, he said softly, "Akane, I... I've always..." he was 
definitely drunk again.
	Akane didn't dare breathe until he finished his 
sentence.
	"I've always... thought you were so goddam hot."
	What?? Akane froze.
	"Shampoo and them look nice and all, but you're so good 
lookin'! It's like, you got that boyish thing,"
	Oh really?!? Akane unfroze, preparing to orbit punch.
	"But I, I kinda like it. Iuknow, It just sorta seems... 
cute."
	Re-frozen. While she considered, Ranma looked up at the 
unmoving fist before him and dodged. To the floor.
	THUD!	
	Akane leaned over him, checking to see if he was 
unharmed as usual. He seemed to be unconscious. Thinking back 
on the popular procedure for unconsciousness, she retrieved a 
bucket of water.
	Poor guy. He has to take a lot of crap, especially from 
his father.
	"And... me," Akane whispered to herself as she poured 
the water over him.
	Getting up, Ranma sputtered a bit, but settled back down 
again. Cold water always did the trick.
		"Phhfddaddahuh? Whah?" asked a somewhat stuporous 
Ranma, hopping to her feet, then slowly lowering back down to 
a sit.
	"Ranma, are you sure you're not hurt?" pleaded Akane.
	"Nah, cuz I was hurt, I'd be bleedin'," She answered 
nonchalantly, "And I don't see no blood."
	Akane blinked, somehow unable to dispute the logic... 
"Oh." Suddenly, she remembered the train of thought they had 
been on before.
	"Ranma, do you actually think I'm cute?"
	Ranma looked at Akane as though she had just asked the 
world's dumbest question. "Well, duh, Akane... Hey, do you 
think I'm cute?"
	"Well, I guess I do, Ranma..." Akane trailed off into 
one of those moments that happen far too rarely.
	Ranma smiled and commented, "Cool. Hey, I gotta pee."
	Akane facefaulted as the moment shattered. Ranma, 
somehow unaware of Akane's reaction, stumbled off to the 
bathroom.
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	*
	Twenty minutes later, Akane began to get worried about 
Ranma, as she had yet to return from the bathroom. She made 
her way to the bathroom, genuinely concerned. Ranma wasn't 
there.
	Akane looked around for several minutes and into several 
rooms, including Ranma's, before she entered her own. There, 
on Akane's bed, was Ranma, passed out and with a note in her 
hand. As Akane could see "TO AKANE" written at the top 
(poorly), she took the liberty of removing it from Ranma's 
grasp and reading it. {Author's note: I found it funny to 
imagine Akane/drunken Ranma-chan reading this in a VO. I 
strongly suggest it.}
	"TO AKANE: When I call you a tomboy, I am being mean. 
Then you hit me. I think I don't want you to hit me. That 
hurts and I don't like it. I like you. Don't get mad at me 
again, ok? You should get mad at Kuno, because he is stupid 
and I hate him. He tries to feel me up, but that's gross. I'm 
a guy so he's gay. I think you're hot, and I'm a girl now, so 
am I gay? If you think I'm hot as a girl, it would be cool. I 
think I'm gonna fall asleep. I lo... [Scribbling trailing 
off]"
	Akane folded up the note and put it in her pocket. She 
reminded herself not to let Nabiki come across it. Exhausted, 
mostly emotionally, by the evening's events, Akane left Ranma 
where she was. Careful to close the door behind her, Akane 
stepped to Kasumi's room, deciding that Kasumi wouldn't mind 
if Akane took a nap on her bed.
			*					*				
	*
	"Oh dear," Kasumi said, upon seeing Ranma in Akane's 
room, "I wonder what he's doing there?"
	"Oh dear," Kasumi repeated, upon seeing Akane in 
Kasumi's own room, "I suppose I'll just let them sleep."
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	*
	[Author's note: That's it. There's no more. The scene 
change went nowhere. Now you have to use your OWN imagination 
like a good little author, because I don't wanna use mine no 
more.
	So what does the community think? Funny? Stupid? 
Revilable? (The spelling checker thinks that word should be 
"revisable." That may be an omen...) Well, If you have 
comments, criticisms, or just want to e-mail me 
(pleasepleasepleasepleaseidontevergetanyemailsoifyoudontemail
meiwillfeelbadandcrydoyouwantmetocrywellthen) at 
Big_Joe@n2.com. And if you want to MST this... Please do! I 
know it's damn well got enough faults! I wanna at least laugh 
at em!
 -That crazy DUNOTS]
TOGGG!


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