Subject: [FFML] Re: [SM][Teaser] Sailor Moon Redux
From: Ajax
Date: 2/23/2000, 2:52 PM
To: jstaik1043@earthlink.net
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

I like the idea behind this, good concept. I've
always wondered if the senshi couldn't do
anything besides their fixed attacks, and
reworking their powers to their personality and
lifestyle caught my interest. However, I think it
could have been better if you had worked the
changes in gradually, instead of the cats
dropping them on us with a full explanation in
the first page. This way it seems more like
visiting one of those webpages that give you all
the boring statistics about the senshi.
I'm not too sure I like Ami coming off malicious
like that at the end of this teaser, either, but
hey, it's your story.
Peace,
AjaX

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