Ahem, first off I am addressing several C&Cs I got after writing the
last part to Permanent.
Well, I am definitely glad to hear from you. Thanks for the input, some
of you mentioned some concern that Permanent's story was becoming forced.
For example, Akane disregarding Ranma's warnings after developing a
trusting relationship with her.
You can now rest assured, that her actions will be explained in the next
Chapter when she get's together with Ranma again. I had this planned from
the beginning by the way, Permanent has been planed out completely for
some time now, I already have an ending for it.
Also, I am glad to tell you that Permanent will not have [dark] tags on
it again for quite some time. Why? Because I also planned this, Ranma and
the crew are going to get a small rest and then all hell will break loose
again. Now for a little something to tease you with.
I still have to introduce Ukyo and Happosai after all, I'm not saying
it will lose anything in the process, but just to keep you from getting
disapointed neither will be very dark tales.
Happosai is annoying, but hardly something Ranma would spend much time
trying to exterminate. He's just not quite evil enough to deserve total
eratication; but don't expect her to have an easy time with him. As for
Ukyo, I have something special planned for her.
Akane and Kuno will both continue to have an important part in the
story, and NO Kuno is not suicidal now.
Yes, Permanent will become Dark again eventually, but even I need a rest
from the really angsty stuff occasionally. Plus Ranma has to build up
certain things for later chapters. I'm not saying why, but it's important
that she not spend all of her time eradicating demons and being a
murderous and borderline evil character. [Even though she hasn't really
been that way in a while.]
I will say this though, Akane will not have an easy time of patching
things up with Ranma, and Ryoga has his own problems to deal with now
despite his close relationship with the pigtailed mage.
Akane also has a new problem to deal with that might surprise you.
Hope you all continue to read, as I really enjoy writing this story.
Ja-ne!
Carrotglace@juno.com
Who also wrote Spirit within back when he was Catbert BTW. [It came up
in one of theC&Cs.]
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