At 07:51 PM 2/21/00 -0800, Rhea Seraph wrote:
Hard to comment because you don't have an actual plot yet. I like the
I know.
idea of Hikaru as a K-9 corps cop; makes good sense. But you need a plot
beyond 'the Rayearth girls join SV2', which you don't currently have.
Only Hikaru joins SV2.
Also, does this assume the events of MKR happened or didn't happen?
They happened. That's where the events at the end of of Rayearth 1 and
Patlabor the Movie come in...<EG>
Ever wonder exactly what sort of work Umi's father does? You'll find out.
Fuu will have achieved her goal of becoming a computer programmer--guess who
she works for now..amd who her immediate suprior _used_ to be.
Oh, and a little John Woo homage towards the end, just to keep y'all
interested in reading it all the way through ^_^
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