As interesting as the story is, it just streches credibility to believe that
Bell would go to the Skuld for advice on advancing her relationship with
Keiichi. Skuld, who'd LOVE to see Keiichi stop bother her oneesama? Not to
mention Skuld has even less experience with boyfriends than Bell. I just
think you're going about it the wrong way.
Come to think about it, lots of people never took her seriously.
I find that hard to believe. And people DO take her quite seriously.
She carefully maintained a facade of unearthly serenity
What little has been shown of her past indicates that it is not a facade.
Besides, she acts the same way with her sisters and Peorth.
She new the heavy price that many a mortal had to pay for living with gods.
I think that should be 'had paid'.
Don't despair, with some polishing this could be great!