At 07:57 PM 2/16/00 -0800, you wrote:
Epilouge
After a brief courtship Ranma and Kasumi were married. Ranma later became
the worlds greatest Sumo wrestler and Kasumi and Ranma lived happily ever
after.
...Until Ranma died of a stroke at age 36, leaving Kasumi widowed and
taking care of three panda-shaped children.
Actually, this was pretty funny. The only other fic I've ever seen that
portrayed one of our favorite characters as anything other than incredibly
pleasant to behold was 'Sukeban (sp?) Senshi', in which Usagi is horribly
scarred.
I suggest trimming quite a bit at the beginning to give the joke better
timing and speed, though. My $.02
C.
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