Subject: [FFML] Re: [General C&C] Taming of the Horse/Centaur
From: Donovan A Willett
Date: 2/16/2000, 8:00 PM
To: Vincent Seifert
CC: "ffml@fanfic.com" <ffml@fanfic.com>



Vincent Seifert wrote:

On Wed, 16 Feb 2000, Donovan A Willett wrote:

    This is directed at the series in general since much had been writen
long before I logged onto ffml.

Fine with me.  :)

    Overall, I've really enjoyed this series, and there is little I
would say to change things.  But I do have some thoughts/questions about
3 of the cast.

Shampoo:
    Any chance of seeing a return, if even for one chapter.  Could be
interesting to see how she's changed after Ranma nearly killed her.

Had I been more ambitious when I wrote Taming, I might not have written
Shampoo out quite so abruptly, because I like the character and I miss
writing her.  I actually have plans to get Shampoo and the Joketsuzoku
involved in the story again, by having Ranma and Akane go to China; that
tale is taking shape in my head, but it's a long one that I'm not yet
skilled enough to write to my satisfaction.


    Actually, I rather liked how you handled the resolution of the Shampoo
affair.  It would take watching Ranma ready to kill and Akane stopping him to
break through to them.  And I can easily see Colounge recognizing that it
would be better to take another path.

da Donovan



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