This is directed at the series in general since much had been writen
long before I logged onto ffml.
Overall, I've really enjoyed this series, and there is little I
would say to change things. But I do have some thoughts/questions about
3 of the cast.
Shampoo:
Any chance of seeing a return, if even for one chapter. Could be
interesting to see how she's changed after Ranma nearly killed her.
Perhaps she could be trying to stop one of her tribe-mates who ignores
Colonge's proclamation.
Ryoga:
When are we gonna catch up with the 'epilogue' and see him. Or is
this deliberate?
Nabiki:
In your 'alt-future' story Transistions, you hinted that she is in
effect irredeamable as she takes off and forgets her family. I hope
this ain't true, but then again, I am a Nabiki fan. I just think she
needs something to crack through the ice she formed in reaction to her
mother's death. (Yes, I do subscribe to the school that the behaviors
of the Tendo girls are all reflections of how they reacted to their
Mom's death. Nabiki in effect became a bit of a control freak. But
that's just me.)
Donovan Willett
btw: One last thing. Kasumi has access to one thing that Taro could
accept happily as a dowery. While Japanesse naming conventions don't
match those of his villige, I'm sure he would be willing to bend a bit
if he were to become 'Tendo Taro.' Not that I'm endorcing or condemning
the match...
"Opinions are like.... well, you know the rest."