Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/Alt] [fic] A Rather Silly Thought - Prologue and Chapter One (final?)
From: "Christopher Angel" <angelcj@home.com>
Date: 2/15/2000, 2:41 AM
To: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
CC: <ffml@fanfic.com>


OK, here's the final candidate.  Hey, I'm in Grad School, I have no time.

But you sleep, right? Just lose that for five nights a week or so and
you'll have plenty of extra time to write. It works for me.

Nonononono.  Baaaad plan.  Makes Chris neurotic.

eyes, and her figure was yet more...healthy.

Personally, I think 'robust' might convey the meaning better. But that's
just an opinion.

Noted.  Agreed.

"She is NOT a trollop!"

The young blonde man frowned at the brunette and then said, "It is not
our
place to naysay true love, be it wild like a hawk or gentle like a dove."

Or goofy looking, like a pheonix that looks like a chicken that wishes to
rest on your head.

*chortle*

The girl stopped and looked at him with a sick expression.  "Brother
dear,
do me the favor of not speaking when you're like that.  It makes my
stomach
churn."

Ah, so Dachi and Kunou-baby. Interesting.

Ach, he is nae a Kuno.  Well, not really.

"HiiiiiiYA!"

Hand drove towards brick.

*smash*

Hand 1, Brick 0.

A second brick found its way to the hand before it too could be smashed.

Hand 1, Bricks 1. The next round would decide it all

Heh.  Get used to that.  I'm writing the narration for this one MY way.

Kasumi shook her head at the display in front of her.  "Akane," she said
admonishingly.  "This is not a very seemly hobby for a proper young girl.
How do you ever plan to get dates like this?"

Akane was about to reply, 'By putting out' but realized there wasn't even
the hint of a lime tag in the header, and thought better of it.

Hmm.  Maybe I should start putting a lime tag on this.  The sexual
innuendo's gonna be flying pretty fast and heavy in this.

What is your relation to them?

"Mistress," the girl responded.

"To which one?" Soun asked.

"Why to both, of course."

*whip crack*


"Nevermind them," Akane said with a smile, and looked at the two girls
earnestly.  "I'm Akane.  Want to be friends?"

What? She's going to ignore Kunou?

*shrug* Girl to be friend with >>>>>> another boy


"Ranma is quite tired by her recent fight," Kodachi interrupted.  "I
would
be happy to spar with you."

And put the smackdown on you.

If you SMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLL what The Rose is growing!

"Okay," Akane shrugged, and began walking to the dojo.  "Just let me
change
into my gi."

Akane changed from her gi to her normal clothing?

>From the manga, she was in her normal clothes when she met Ranma.

And Kunou seems a bit rougher around the edges. Still curious as to what
curse he has.

He's raised by Genma.  'Nuff said.

"There's a pervert in the bathroom!" Akane yelled, hefting the stone a
little higher.

"Impossible. My brother's right here," Kodachi pointed to Kunou, who stood
across the room.

Hey!  This Tatewaki is a Nice Guy (tm)(R)(C).

"A pervert you cry, and thus I hear," Tatewaki exclaimed, and lept into
the
house to head up the stairs.  He pulled a bokken from seemingly nowhere
and
held it at the ready.  "To protect these maidens, be glad I'm near!"

I've got it. Spring of Drowned Crappy Poet. Right?

You betcha buddy!

"Perhaps I should demonstrate," Kodachi sighed.  With that, she picked up
her brother and tosed him into the pond behind the house.  "Add water,
instant idiot."

Ranma: What do you mean 'add water'? He's an idiot as is.

Tatewaki: (sighs) Why must a noble, true warrior like myself be subject to
such prejudice?

"Not quite, Tendo-san," Tatewaki replied.  "I have fallen into
??????????,

What's with the ???? marks.

Was going to ask if anyone knew how to "Pool of Drowned Bad Poet" into
the -chuan version.

Ranma: I already got one in China. Why don't you take Kunou instead? He'd
be a perfect match for any of the girls, as long as they got earplugs when
he tries to recite poetry.

Back!  Back!  Ruin not mine story!

Reminding his son of what he had missed with his rather voluptuous bride
proved to be a mistake as Ranma proceeded to really beat the stuffing out
of his father.

You are gonna LOVE the start of Ch 2.




*Not bad,* Nabiki said to herself.  "Not bad at all."

"Oh my," Kasumi breathed, "he's good."

 Is Akane unmoved by his little speech? Might want to throw a thought in
from her.

Noted.

If you want to bounce ideas of my head, I'd be willing to listen.

Cool.

Nice work. It'll be interesting to see where you take this one, since you
have a compliant fiancee for a change. (though not ideal by any means.
^_^)

As I explained to a friend...this is Tatewaki, but as he was raised by
Genma.  So while he believes and follows rather closely to classical honor,
he has had it tempered by Genma's rather...loose interpretations on such
things.

--
Christopher Angel




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