As it has been a *long* time since the last post of Lines Of Destiny and I have done some minor and not so minor modifications to the copies I now have on my website, I decided to repost the modified chapters on the FFML.
These are some of the differences between the old and new versions:
Chi was rewritten as Ki in order to be consistent in all my stories.
The family names are written before the given name, as they do in Japan.
The bit at the end of Chapter 7.
Endymion doesn't manifest a sigil anymore (chapters 1 and 7).
Rei already knows that Ranma is married when he comes to the shrine.
The cafe scene with Haruka and Michiru has been modified a bit at the end.
The Moon Kingdom's demise has been moved from 1500 to 8000 years ago; I'll explain the rest eventually.
The term "mid-level mage" has been replaced by something more precise, as well as have all the references for these terms in chapter 9.
Multiple typo corrections everywhere.
The new version of chapter 11 doesn't have the halfway-through Pluto scene where she observes Katsunishiki and Co. coming to the shrine. Pretend it never happened.
Chapter 12 will be out on Tuesday.
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A large *angry* bird - Aaaahh!"
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