* X the Lost (wallen@interconnect.net) [000211 17:55]:
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From: David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net>
To: <zaxxon@sfcreators.com>
Cc: Anime FanFic Mailing List <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Saturday, February 12, 2000 2:05 AM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/SM] "In the Shadow of the Phoenix Moon" Part 1
Aghast, Pluto asked, "How could you... You'll lose your
Throne...
Do you know what you've done? You're not *married*!"
It was Serenity's turn to narrow her eyes as she replied, "It
was
*you* who pointed out that most Serenitys don't marry and that 'Maiden
of Magic' is only an title like 'General.' After if my *mother* was
always a 'Maiden' then where did *I* come from?"
This exchange doesn't make sense. If Serenity wouldn't stand a risk of
losing her throne then Pluto would know it. In fact Pluto does know it,
so why does she say such a thing?
I think this shows that Pluto is surprised, Serenity just told her
something she was not expecting and just blurted out something kind
of stupid. It happens to even the best of us. Pluto probably felt
kind of silly later.
Basically, yes...
So I wan't too far off what I was trying to accomplish...
This is an interesting fic and I am eagerly awaiting the next part.
Thanks...
Hopefully, the next part will be out sometime next month...
--
"Zaxxon"
<zaxxon@sfcreators.com> <http://sfcreators.com/altantis/>
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"In every Life, some rain must fall," quoted the phoenix. "Now is it that
a good thing or a bad thing? Depends on your definition of 'rain.'"